[oneshot] Show Must Go On (Koichi x Tsubasa)

Oct 31, 2008 03:56

A certain annonymous someone requested a certain favorite under-appreciated crack pairing of mine on the JE Rare Pair Meme. And as I've been meaning to write this forever and enjoyed the prompt... Moderate spoilers for Endless SHOCK. Also I suck at naming things but what else is new?

Show Must Go On )

tackey & tsubasa, requests, p: domoto koichi/imai tsubasa, kinki kids

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fenlings November 1 2008, 04:13:20 UTC
OH MY GOD this story is so so hot and FANTASTICALLY characterized, what are you talking about (I especially liked the potted plant bit).

“You and Tsuyoshi really are alike.”
MAYBE TOO WELL CHARACTERIZED WAH.
(Oh the ANGST of a substitute.)

There should COMPLETELY be more Koichi + Tsubasa fics. Yaaaaaaaay.
(insert moar sex plz comment here)

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coldbloodedfire November 1 2008, 05:23:49 UTC
Eeeeee, thank you so much! I was really afraid my Tsuba would be super wonky so I'm glad that it seems I wasn't too far off the mark.

(Oh the ANGST of a substitute.)
Mwahahahahaha, I'm glad someone else caught that! *shifty eyes*

And I agree! There should be more KinKi and Takitsuba fics in general, but this pairing makes me especially happy. Let's start a revoltuion! 8|

(There was supposed to be pornz in here, but I totally wussed out. Here's hoping I eventually man up and write some pointlessly dirty things for these two? >.> )

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honeyswallow November 1 2008, 11:44:23 UTC
Wah, this was awesome! Somehow it didn't need the pr0n at all - the tension was there and omg poor substitute Tsubon (but on the other hand, since in my eyes Ko-chan is like Tsuyoshi's property, it would not have sat well with me any other way)

I really loved your style, you have given great thought to their characterization&hearts

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coldbloodedfire November 1 2008, 19:45:27 UTC
Aaaah, thank you so much! That means a lot coming from you! ♥

I'm glad it did well without the smut (though I do still have the urge to write it. Maybe one day. *cough*) and I feel you on Doko/Dots being, as the kids say, my OTP. But Tsuba-as-Tsuyo-sub also works because I'm a horrible, horrible little girl. I really enjoyed writing it and there's a good potential for angst so maybe I'll give these two another shot sometime... *rubs hands evily*

And, again, thank you so much! Also as soon as I finish the request I'm working on currently, I shall be working on that Nishikato for you! ♥ ♥ ♥

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honeyswallow November 1 2008, 21:07:26 UTC
Ahaha, so you haven't forgotten ^_^
Looking forward to it!

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renruki November 1 2008, 12:41:29 UTC
LOVED it!

(Though I couldn't forget about Fukada Kyoko calling Koichi a dead cucumber, but that's a different story ^^;;; )

I don't think Tsubasa was terribly OOC.
And Takki being able to make friends with a potted plant. WIN!!!!!!!! I had a very good laugh about that line.

Koichi threatening Takki and MA was good too ^___^

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coldbloodedfire November 1 2008, 19:39:46 UTC
Thank you!! :D

(Well Koichi definitely does have his dead cucumber moments, so it's forgiven. XD)

Hearing my Tsuba wasn't super off makes me feel a lot less anxious. ♥ And, man, if everyone keeps telling me they love Tackey x potted plant I may really have to write it after all. XD;

Koichi is my favorite S after all. ♥

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lifeinthebox November 1 2008, 16:15:53 UTC
Certain anonymous someone... whoever could that be? *coughs*

And I felt the need to once again express my deep and profound love for this. Also, I expect a Tackey x potted plant story in the near future. >.>

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coldbloodedfire November 1 2008, 19:36:28 UTC
Gosh, I wonder. >.>

You better love it! 8| *shakes fist* And AUGH, WOMAN. Like I don't have enough things to write as it is. XD (not that i couldn't picture it easily but, y'know... )

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lifeinthebox November 1 2008, 20:04:47 UTC
But, but... Tackey and a potted plant. Come on, that could be EPIC. 8D *is shot*

I'll pay you in Koyama and Aiba scheming crack. *dangles it before you*

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sano_tsuyoshi November 1 2008, 22:37:44 UTC
well, you left me without words...
i really like it!!
there should be more fics of koichi and tsuba!!
very nice really!!!

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