Comments | colberry: 'boy kings' - [Aoi/Uruha, etc] Prologue/?

colberry

'boy kings' - [Aoi/Uruha, etc] Prologue/?

Apr 08, 2013 03:10

Title: boy kings
Genre: Slice of life, romance, drama
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha, Reita/Uruha (mostly onesided), etc.
Notes: It's been a year since I started this WIP... So, let's do this, shall we? :D

Synopsis: In which Uruha isn't completely oblivious, just slow on the uptake.

( And even when Aoi’s ribs are sharp, the noir glint in his eyes is sharper as he catches Uruha’s steady gaze. His jaw is clenched, hands gripping his guitar so tight - veins so stark, blue, the only color Aoi has to his name. )

Comments 8

srsbusinessman April 9 2013, 02:19:29 UTC

loved it, especially the last line :)

colberry August 10 2013, 19:22:27 UTC

(omg so sorry for the late reply ;A;/)

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

delusive_doll April 9 2013, 14:33:54 UTC

I don't read much of Aoi/Uruha fics nowadays preferring seme!Uruha instead, but your style of writing has really captivated me. It's really "flowy" (is there such word?) and even witty and humorous (lol at Aki's aloha shorts, as in very apt :)

I like the characterization of Uruha and Aoi so far, looking forward to see an update from you soon.

Cheers!

colberry August 10 2013, 22:13:52 UTC

Ahh, thank you! :D

I don't really follow the rules of pairing order for seme/uke - so, I can guarantee you that there will be scenes for both :D (<-- equal 'hands-on' opportunist :3). But I'm so happy that you're enjoying this little ficlet so far all the same :DD

♥

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colberry August 10 2013, 22:16:13 UTC

So sorry for the late reply! D:

Thank you so much, love. I definitely miss posting to LJ, and just all the camaraderie and epicness from the good ol' days :') Hopefully it will revive soon enough!

Thank you for your kind words once again! I'm definitely excited for where this fic is going >:3 ♥

venomousliberty April 10 2013, 09:53:27 UTC

I'm so glad to see this in my F-list! It has been soooo long since you last posted a fic and this is just... I can't even find the words to describe it but beautiful. Everything was beautiful, the words you used, the way you write, the little humor and angst and the way you characterized them~ This is really just... it's nice to read something this amazing after a long time~ ^^

colberry August 10 2013, 22:17:14 UTC

I'm so sorry for the late reply, love! But thank you so, so much. You're seriously too kind omg ;A;

I'm just so glad you are enjoying this fic so far, and I hope to update for you soon enough :D ♥

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colberry August 10 2013, 22:18:58 UTC

Ahh, yes! It was a WIP titled "pea soup" :D
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far~ (more soon, promise!) ♥