!!!! i remember seeing this fic on infinitesanta's 2013 masterlist but it was locked and for whatever reason it never registered to me that i'd just have to join the comm to see it. ANYWAY, i haven't read the original one, but this revamped version is just so good.
i honestly wish i could have a better comment, but just know that i really adore the concept of this, the idea of the loop, and the first time i read it i was in bed doing it casually and then the next thing i knew the plot turned it up to 500 and i was like what, so then i read it again properly, and just aaah. so good. i love the hogyu dynamic here, and how equally matched they are, with the undercurrent of rivalry. it strikes me as very true as how they would be in real life? and the way you executed the plot was well done too! you world build this universe so well, without the need of heavy exposition, and it was really easy to read but also not simple? if that makes sense?
sorry for this mediocre comment, but i really enjoyed this! ty for writing this <3
wow, i can't believe it's almost three years since this story was posted. three years on, this is still the best fic i've ever received? i honestly think about this every year lmao. so much pain but this universe is tragically beautiful. thank you again ;u; i'm actually not exactly sure which parts are revised bc i haven't read the original one in a while (this always makes me sob so as much as i love it i pretty much only read it once a year welp) but it's still as perfect tho. this is a lame comment but yes-- just wanted to leave a note to say this story changed my life forever-- ;; ♥
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i honestly wish i could have a better comment, but just know that i really adore the concept of this, the idea of the loop, and the first time i read it i was in bed doing it casually and then the next thing i knew the plot turned it up to 500 and i was like what, so then i read it again properly, and just aaah. so good. i love the hogyu dynamic here, and how equally matched they are, with the undercurrent of rivalry. it strikes me as very true as how they would be in real life? and the way you executed the plot was well done too! you world build this universe so well, without the need of heavy exposition, and it was really easy to read but also not simple? if that makes sense?
sorry for this mediocre comment, but i really enjoyed this! ty for writing this <3
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