07; exo; hold too tight

Aug 14, 2012 23:30

hold too tight | r for inexplicit sex, mature situations
onesided!xiumin/chen, onesided!chen/kris
900 words
oneshot
prompt: leading the only witness to your dreams astray
this is really bad btw
also please check this out, xiumin and chen need more love ;u;

Minseok tries to catch what falls from between Jongdae's fingers.

But he only becomes a mess. )

exo

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zqlin August 27 2012, 00:39:21 UTC
Ah, this was really good.

“I wish I could hate you.”

Loved the ending, (but not really, because one-sided, but you know what I mean) and it hit just right.

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portaldice August 27 2012, 02:01:53 UTC
hello again~ :)

haha, to be honest, i don't really like this one ;; like i mentioned at the end, it's just something i wrote for the sake of writing something else, so everything's just wonkers. i'm glad you think it's okay, haha x)

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zqlin August 27 2012, 14:52:24 UTC
Well, hello :)

And hn, I guess we can't always be happy with what we write, but as readers, we don't know what went down inside your head as wrote it, but I do think that this story came out nice anyway; it was interesting at the least ^^

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himrj02 September 29 2012, 08:47:30 UTC
beautiful

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portaldice October 1 2012, 09:02:18 UTC
thank you~

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