Finally!

Sep 03, 2008 09:12


Wow, I've been really neglecting my posting.... oh well. Here's the first part of my new fic. Please tell me if it's good enough to keep posting, all comments welcome!

Title: Baby Makes Four(Part 1/?)
Author: RiverSorrowDH
Rating: PG-13 to be safe. Might change in later chapters...
Summary: Michael and Stacey are still married and have a 4 year old ( Read more... )

cohnstro, jason, david, michael

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rinnuninnu September 3 2008, 13:54:32 UTC
This is great! I love the twist with the kisses in the kitchen.:)

Can't wait to read more.<3

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riversorrowdh September 3 2008, 23:54:32 UTC
thanks! I'll post as soon as i can.

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loveisdance01 September 3 2008, 14:02:55 UTC
Holy crap i am in love already. It's definately good enough to keep posting! I was a little shocked when David and Michael kissed...i just wasn't expecting it. What a great little twist and Jason was adorable. Seriously that kid might be the death of me. I loved the characterizations of everyone. And how Jason is with Grace i almost died. lol. David is just hilarious. And are Jason/David together or something? and just add Michael to the mix? or is it just Michael and the other two with him? i was just curious. This is going to be awesome i can tell already. Fantastic first chapter!

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riversorrowdh September 3 2008, 23:58:23 UTC
In answer to your questions:
Jason and David share an apartment, so yes, they are together.
Even though Michael is with Stacey, it is a Cohnstro fic.
Thanks so much for the comments!

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loveisdance01 September 4 2008, 00:25:09 UTC
sweet. i'm loving it. Can't wait for more!

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riversorrowdh September 4 2008, 12:33:13 UTC
Expect the next installment in a couple of days. Thanks for reading!

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aligning_stars September 3 2008, 14:37:02 UTC
in loveeeee.
gracie is precious!!! and jason with her is just amazing. awww jasons such a good mommy. haha
and the unexpected making out in the kitchen!!! I can't wait to read more of what that's about! I need background! heee I am loving this already. xD

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riversorrowdh September 4 2008, 00:00:43 UTC
haha, that was pretty much the reaction to the kissing. I'll post a little more of the background with each part, i promise!

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aligning_stars September 4 2008, 12:36:31 UTC
I CAN'T WAIT! XD

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hatemetoday_xx September 3 2008, 16:25:26 UTC
“Please, Daddy?” Gracie says quietly and looks up at me with her big blue eyes, batting her eyelashes at me. David and Jason lean down on either side of her.

“Please, Daddy?” They say simultaneously, giving me a look identical to Gracie’s, eyelashes and all. As my heart melts I feel I have no choice but to give in to the three puppies in front of me. I groan in defeat. “Okay, okay. Go get dressed, Gracie.”
So cute! <3

As he draws closer and our breaths mingle, I lean forward and press my lips hungrily against his. Twenty seconds of bliss later, I receive a tap on my shoulder.

Looking over my shoulder, I see Jason staring at me with his big blue eyes. “Aw, are you feeling left out?” I ask. He replies by pushing out his lower lip. I laugh and pull him towards me, my lips exploring his and my hands exploring his dreadlocks
LOVE that part <3

Can't wait to read the next parts <3

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riversorrowdh September 4 2008, 00:01:39 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

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sarahscrazy4dc September 3 2008, 18:41:42 UTC
More please like now!
I love this! Way tooo cute!

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riversorrowdh September 4 2008, 00:02:58 UTC
I'll post again as soon as i can, i'm just a little busy at the moment. Expect more in the next couple of days.

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