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Because this journal of mine looks unbelievably sad, it's time to post random fiction - or in the case of this one, not-so-fiction. It's called "Spectator".
Outside her window the world slowly lightens to a pale monochrome, and she realises she has passed another night without sleep.
The tree just past the window glass doesn't care one bit. It ( Read more... )
Outside her window the world slowly lightens to a pale monochrome, and she realises she has passed another night without sleep.
The tree just past the window glass doesn't care one bit. It ( Read more... )
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Recalling your interesting writing style from before, and the well-written drabble dedicated to Princess Tutu, I drop by your journal now after noticing it is rather...empty (unfortunately).
Anyhow, I liked this. Original fictions usually don't impress me (I tend to be nit-picky) but simply reading this snippet has convinced me you are an excellent writer. Your writing style is very sharp and poignant, descriptive but certainly not wordy. I state this now after reading this.
By the way, would you mind terribly if I friend you? I have this strange quirk of friending good writers to keep an eye on and review for, and you have just proven yourself to have latent talent for writing. :)
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And you do not know how to friend back a person? Well, fortunately, that is a fairly simple task to do.
On the User Info page of any fellow LJ user, there is always going to be a little strip bar--directly above where your icon is situated. On that bar there is the Add Friends option, the To-Do List (unimportant), the Memories (for checking posts you saved that interested you), and so forth.
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Another random question... How do you feel about beta reading? Your reviews are always so thoughtful and helpful, and I have a couple more Princess Tutu fics in the works that could really benefit from another pair of eyes.
Also, if you have any challenges for me fic-wise, I'd be happy to attempt them :)
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