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[coggerfickle]

Challenge #112 - blossom

Rosa Chinensis

It blossomed on his chest, like a rose of the finest pedigree spreading crimson petals across his fragile, human skin.

Time slowed for D, but too late; the pistol had already claimed his detective.  Leon fell with agonising slowness.  Forever came and went, and the body hit the ground with a dull

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Beta-reading

[paperflowers06]

Hi, I saw the message you left on my livejournal (and I'm responding here, I hope that's OK). I would love for you to be my beta-reader. :) I haven't found anyone yet, and I was about to give up hope. So I'm really happy that you responded. ^_^ I don't mind that you've never betaed before. I'm pretty good with pointing out where I need help and mostly, I just need a second set of eyes to make sure that everything makes sense outside of my head. I hope you won't mind if I ask you a lot of questions (it'll usually be of the form "Does it make sense if this character does X?).

Anyway, you can email me at paperflowers@pixelbits.ca

Paper Flowers

PS: I couldn't get through Lord of the Rings either.

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