"Deconstructing Neal", Peter/Neal, NC-17

[coffeethyme4me]

Title: Deconstructing Neal
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Comments

[daria234]

Majorly hot.

I love all the things that losing his charm MEANS

[coffeethyme4me]

Thanks, Daria! It probably says a lot about ME that this is what I immediately saw for "bouncy, bouncy". ;-)

[rabidchild]

GUH - that was too hot. I love his vulnerability there at the end. MAN!

[coffeethyme4me]

Thank you, RC!! :-D I have a kink for undone!Neal.

[batgurl10]

Guh! U R a PORN QUEEN! I swear every fucking thing u write with P/N is just scathingly hot! I dont know if its your word choice or the construction or just the Peter/Neal visual that your fic immediately creates in my brain but I just HAD to post on your journal for all the world to see that there is something" incredibly visually erotic about your stories...

and I read a LOT of pron...lol. dayum....

[coffeethyme4me]

What a stunning compliment! Thank you so much for that and for taking the time to read and leave feedback. :-)

[elrhiarhodan]

One of the things I love most about this, and about all of your erotica is how visual it is. You create word photographs, word videos that convey all of the emotion and none of the salaciousness of such a voyeuristic exercise.

I see and I feel and I am given a bone deep comprehension of the love that is expressed.

Thank you.

[coffeethyme4me]

Wow. Thank YOU. I'm going to frame this comment in my mind. <3

[janedujour]

Perfect and right to the point. What else can I say? I loved this.

So glad I found your journal as soon as I started looking for Neal/Peter fics. It's really convenient that all the amazing White Collar slash I need is in one place.

[coffeethyme4me]

What a truly lovely compliment! Thank you so much!