"Quiver", Peter/Neal(El), NC-17, Wing!Fic

Mar 29, 2011 18:46

Title: Quiver
Author: coffeethyme4me
Pairing: Peter/Neal/(El)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Wing!Fic!
Written for my good friend, rabidchild67. I very much hope you like it!!
Warnings: Getting off on pain? And, well, wings.
Words: 2,360

Neal was shaking, tears swimming in his big, round eyes. )

kink: wing!fic, pairing: peter/neal, white collar, rating: nc-17

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elrhiarhodan March 30 2011, 01:55:33 UTC
BREATHE IN.

BREATHE OUT.

BREATHE IN.

BREATHE OUT.

This is completely and utterly, utterly, utterly magnificent.

I am in awe. In tears.

Wow.

YOU ARE AMAZING. TRULY, TRULY AMAZING>

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coffeethyme4me March 30 2011, 01:57:22 UTC
You make me wanna reread it!!!!!!!!! :-D

{{{{{{{{{{Hugs you tight}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}

You don't know what feedback like this means to me.

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!

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jrosemary March 30 2011, 03:02:13 UTC
I blame Elrhiarhodan for starting my addiction to wingfic--and you for continuing it!

This is marvelous--loved the description of the pain involved with the wings (and the wings themselves, of course.) And Peter's reaction to the wings. And his need to call El afterward!

I want to know more about how this happened to Neal, but leaving it unsaid adds an intriguing mystery that I can fill in. Still, if you ever return to give us more information--well, I won't complain!

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coffeethyme4me March 30 2011, 03:04:30 UTC
Thank you so so much!!!!!! The lack of information is due to plot being my weak point. ;-) So I'm glad it works without that!! Thanks for the lovely comment!!

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ckll March 30 2011, 06:32:06 UTC
From hurt to ecstasy...

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coffeethyme4me March 30 2011, 17:02:40 UTC
Thanks for reading!! And I love your icon!

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ckll March 31 2011, 04:00:32 UTC
You can take *giggles*

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yamoriya March 30 2011, 07:02:33 UTC
So beautiful..and magnificent. Totally LOVE this!!
You're amazing.....*sigh*

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coffeethyme4me March 30 2011, 17:03:03 UTC
Thank you so much!! :-D

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daniel_shadow March 30 2011, 21:57:12 UTC
Loving it so much!! So tender and sweet with sexiness!!

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coffeethyme4me March 30 2011, 22:02:05 UTC
THANK YOU! I'm glad I could blend those different tones into this. That's what I was going for. :-)

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