Comments | coffeethyme4me: "Whipped", Peter/Neal, NC-17

coffeethyme4me

"Whipped", Peter/Neal, NC-17

Feb 24, 2011 09:49

Title: Whipped
Author: coffeethyme4mePairing: Peter/Neal ( Read more... )

pairing: peter/neal, kink: bdsm, white collar, rating: nc-17

Comments 9

slashfanatic22 February 24 2011, 18:41:56 UTC

UGH! SO Fucking HOT!!! It's so short, yet you get the smut and all the emotions in anyway! The fact that Neal can't really talk after the whipping and he's crying while riding Peter...It was so awesome on so many levels! This was Amazing!

coffeethyme4me February 24 2011, 18:49:16 UTC

Aww! Thank you! I think you got off of it exactly what I intended, too. :-D

sara_tsuzuki February 26 2011, 01:13:44 UTC

You always surprise me. That was Hoooooot and angsty and hoooooooooooooooot!!

coffeethyme4me February 26 2011, 01:24:00 UTC

What a great compliment, THANK YOU!

verbiet February 28 2011, 14:35:35 UTC

Ah this was amazing!

One small correction though - you mean waist not waste. Just one tiny thing and it kinda threw me out of the moment a bit... ^-^;

But other than that this story is FANTASTIC and very hot.

coffeethyme4me February 28 2011, 15:06:45 UTC

LOL! I think that's a new typo for me. Thanks!!!

afiawri March 5 2011, 07:16:50 UTC

Oh, little pain slut obedient Neal, the way you write him ecspecially, has the biggest chunk of my heart. I just want to pet him. And hurt him. <3

coffeethyme4me March 5 2011, 18:35:52 UTC

Thanks!!!

And thank you so much for all the little lovely comments! My LJ isn't working right, so I haven't gotten them in my email, but now that I'm checked my actual inbox, it's so lovely to get to go around and read them all and reply.

Thank you!

movingbox October 10 2014, 22:16:13 UTC

I just love the way you wrote this! So hot