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Feb 18, 2006 16:20

Memento Mori
Supernatural
Dean (gen); PG
890 words
A/N: written for mcee for the With Love fic exchange.

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pairing: dean (gen), fandom: supernatural

Comments 42

charityflint February 18 2006, 22:28:53 UTC

Oh, this just hurts so elegantly.

tucks the picture of Mom back into his wallet and walks out, empty-handed, into the morning.

Empty-handed. That may just sum up most of Dean's sad and lonely life. He's so wounded and simply doesn't know how to heal.

Beautiful work. Thank you so much for sharing.

ink_stain February 19 2006, 16:02:52 UTC

glad you liked this, thanks!

He's so wounded and simply doesn't know how to heal.

that's pretty much it in a nutshell, isn't it? :)

azewewish February 18 2006, 23:31:46 UTC

It's about time you starting writing in this fandom. *g* Well done, as always, hon.

ink_stain February 19 2006, 16:06:04 UTC

!!!

thank you muchly.

does it make me a blatant attention whore if i point out that i wrote another one before this one? yes? yes. :D

azewewish February 19 2006, 16:28:42 UTC

!!!!!!

And I missed it??

*makes gimme hands for link*

ink_stain February 19 2006, 16:34:34 UTC

you DID. *sniff*

it's right here, though, so we all good. :)

theactualworst February 18 2006, 23:53:36 UTC

Wow. That was seriously amazing. I love the way you described everything, I could see it all happening in my mind. This was one to my favorite lines: and all Sam heard was go; Dean knew Dad was really saying stay. Very touching, I loved it! ♥

ink_stain February 19 2006, 16:06:48 UTC

thanks so much!

i think that's one of my favorite lines, too, actually. :)

desertport February 19 2006, 00:38:17 UTC

wondering if it's some kind of bad hoodoo to mourn the living.

No, Dean, it isn't. Being separated from someone you're close to, it's like a death in a way. And that came through so well in this.

This is going in my memories section. The way you built up Dean's grief, it's just stunning. I'm finding it hard to describe my reaction to this work, except to say, wow. Thank you for sharing it.

ink_stain February 19 2006, 16:10:56 UTC

wow, thank you so much. it *is* like death in a way, being separated from a loved one. even a pesky little brother (not that i, as the baby of my own family, would know, but i'm guessing :D).

stormcloude February 19 2006, 01:37:03 UTC

Very nice in such a melancholy way. This family breaks my heart so easily.

ink_stain February 19 2006, 16:12:12 UTC

don't they, though? they just twist that knife in your heart every which way.