Narnia Fic: Carpetbaggers (Complete) (Gen, teen, 120,000 words)

[cofax7]

Title: Carpetbaggers
Rating: Teen
Warnings: some bloodshed, oblique references to slavery, realpolitik
Summary: After the coronation festivities, the real work begins. Set during/after The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe. 120,000 words.
Disclaimer: The original Narnia novels were written by C. S. Lewis; I'm just taking the characters and the

Comments

[gurrier]

Woo! Off on vacation tomorrow, really looking forward to reading this on the plane.

[hawkmoth]

OMG! Off to read!

[cofax7]

Yay, I hope you enjoyed it!

[cofax7]

I know! Kinda long, huh? I think it's the size of 2 or 3 Narnia books all together...

[ropo]

Congrats on finishing!

[cofax7]

Thanks!

[hawkmoth]

Wow. I copuldn't stop reading till I go to the end! Amazing, and brilliant. I really liked where the story went after the parts you had posted previously. The Wyvern was great. The resolution was great. I really like your take on all the Pevensies, especially Susan and Edmund.

[cofax7]

Thank you! And I became very fond of poor Ponsonby...

[anonymous]

Congratulations! Your plot is good; your characterization is lovely. As you admitted in one of your comments, your narrative does seem closer to Edmund and Susan, but all four of the Pevensies are quite well-drawn. I think your view of Lucy is spot-on ("Don't you talk to the trees, too?"), and I sighed in relief when you portrayed Edmund as repentant but still having to drag himself out of relapses (so many authors, or even people, seem to forget that someone can be like this

[cofax7]

Thank you so much for your kind comments!