Comments | cofax7: Narnia fic: Carpetbaggers Chapter V, Part 2 (2,000 words, gen)

cofax7

Narnia fic: Carpetbaggers Chapter V, Part 2 (2,000 words, gen)

Dec 22, 2010 23:03

Chapters I and II are here.

Chapters III and IV and earlier parts of Chapter V are here.

( If you're not made of water they've no interest in you. )

narnia, carpetbaggers, narnia-fic

Comments 2

sg_fignewton December 23 2010, 09:13:29 UTC

Lucy the innocent, hee! Love how Susan didn't clarify what she was talking about. :) And the bow angled to be available if necessary - very good.

So much for them to do, so little time - every time you ground the Witch's tyranny in the real world (business, trade) you make her a little scarier, you know?

I like how Tumnus is somehow even more childlike than Lucy. It suits him well.

cofax7 December 23 2010, 19:27:05 UTC

Love how Susan didn't clarify what she was talking about.

Susan is not looking forward to that conversation with Lucy, although I'm not sure on how good Susan's sex ed is, either.

Thanks for commenting: it's hard for readers to get excited about a section which is basically set-up.