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cryptoxin October 16 2007, 04:37:30 UTC
Dell Martinez = very best OC ever!

I really loved this whole paragraph and line of speculation:

He wondered why so many of their hunts involved spirits or creatures from other lands.

And thank you for the Lagos stuff -- I found myself wondering in the previous section just how you'd finance and run a swanky new casino built from scratch.

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cofax7 October 16 2007, 04:41:05 UTC
Dell's pretty awesome.

As for the financing, I know way too much about the financing and construction of tribal casinos for someone who's never been inside one. *g*

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se_parsons October 16 2007, 22:56:42 UTC
I adore Dell.

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cofax7 October 17 2007, 04:24:56 UTC
Dell is, in fact, pretty awesome.

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cofax7 October 17 2007, 04:25:29 UTC
Yeah. Not everyone is gonna love the hunters. I have a suspicion there's a supernatural ecological balance, and the hunters tend to upset it...

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iamstealthyone December 12 2007, 00:01:51 UTC
Very intriguing how things are shaping up, and Dean’s less-than-ideal encounter at the end was interesting. The boys really have their work cut out for them.

Favorite lines:

Sam caught his breath, choked once, and then spat; he'd learned over the years not to swallow. It didn't help much.

Eew! Good detail.

But as Dean pulled his hand away, the hair came with it, scritching softly across the stained green jacket, dropping bits of leaves.

Eew again! *cringes*

she smiled back helplessly, and looked back at him three times on her way back to the kitchen. But it was a poor tactical decision: when he returned his attention to the table, Sam had already taken the two largest pieces of the pie.

*snickers*

Sam looked twitchy, like if they had wireless here, he would be tapping away at his laptop.

Poor, bereft Sam.

I need steak and eggs to heal! Cannot heal properly on ramen,"

*g* I like Anatole a lot.

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cofax7 December 18 2007, 04:33:52 UTC
Eew again! *cringes*

It's a very vivid image, and one based on a story I was told by a ski-patroller, about a skier who hit a tree and died, and the coyotes got to her... Ew indeed.

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