XF Fic: Gonna Be Different This Time, part 6

[cofax7]

Here's some more of the MAF, for those of you not reading Stargate. *grin*

Comments

[breyer]

That ought to hold y'all for a bit. I hope.

It'll hold me for all of about 30 seconds. More! More! Ahhhh!!!!!

;-)

[cofax7]

Hee. You're so easy. *eg*

[loveanddarkness]

Yes, it held me for a 'bit'.

The 'bit' is now over.

More. Please. Now. Damnit. Thanks.

[cofax7]

I'll ... think about it.

::cackles evilly::

[snacky]

EEP! Don't stop now! I am really, really, REALLY enjoying this!

(Also, am quite bitter whenever I see SG fic on your LJ instead. *g*)

[cofax7]

> Also, am quite bitter whenever I see SG fic on your LJ instead. <

Sorry, hon! XF is work, nowadays, whereas the SG fic is written in zen mode, and is much much easier by comparison.

I will post more, I promise.

[minnow1212]

Well, it might have held me if you hadn't ended on a cliffhanger! :whimper:

Fabulous, though. I liked this:

>It felt good, familiar, after six months in the Midwest. <

How even after everything has gone to hell, there's still something that makes people cling to familiarity. And Mulder's later comparison of the power plant to the house he'd grown up in was a nice echo of that as well.

[cofax7]

Clearly cliffhangers are the way to get people to respond to this. Must remember that.

And thanks for the comments!

[jeviltwin]

Eeek!

There must be more and soon or I will be forced to take drastic measures! (I don't know what those are yet, but I'm scrappy.)

[cofax7]

Eeeps! Drastic measures!

Perhaps you'll be forced to, I dunno, write something?

::blinks innocently::