A Boy and the Sea

[coconutjack]

Title: A Boy and the Sea
Chaptered: Yes.
Rating: G
Summary: Junsu is four and doesn't know any better.
A/N: I know I just finished one fic, but I really couldn't help it. Haha/ This is Jae-centric and NO final word on pairings yet but everyone will be present. They'll be kids, though. ;)

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One

The day Jaejoong’s father announces that they’re going to

Comments

[faricsyung]

AHAHA. Thanks for the A/N at the end. xDD

You're good at writing kids. <3 Heck, you're good at writing. LOL.

I love this!! There's a tinge of sadness, but that's how bitter life can be. Looking forward for upcoming installments. Thanks! <3

[coconutjack]

AHAHA i knew one of you would def. notice, especially after having finished aptf. cracked me up that YOU were the first though. hello again, dear. <333

i love kids. especially dongbang kids. haha. they're insanely cute. XD

[faricsyung]

And I wonder why it made you crack up? Do you think I'd run away at the non-pairing? xP

Hello again to you too, love. ;DD <33

[applesu]

oh my gosh D; four year old junsu has my heart! why so cute?

this is really good - i am v. intrigued!! the way you write jaejoong is beautiful ♥ *rolls away on cloud of love*

[coconutjack]

he's insanely cute. <333 jae is very serious though for a 12yo but it suits him. XD *huggles jae*

thank you very much for reading and reviewing! <333

[kurogoma]

i actually felt really sorry for the dad, the kids don't understand now but it must be tough bringing up three kids on his own.

i love jaejoong's relationship with junsu. not all twelve-year olds would bother with a baby brother the way jaejoong would.

and i love the way you described changmin, all sun-kissed and sparkling.

“How old are you?”
“A hundred,”
“You’re older than me then. I’m only around 93 years old.”

smart ass. XD

[coconutjack]

you're right that the dad is worth being sorry over for. the kids don't know how much their dad actually works to keep their family running.

jae is very big-brotherly. hee. i love him.

ahhh changmin is a surprise. i don't think he'll be any ordinary boy. :D

[thevirginia]

i'm very intrigued! it's actually kind of refreshing to read something that doesn't have a pairing, the obsession with love/sex in this fandom - lols.

and i thought changmin was a ghost until i read your a/n XD~ waiting for more :)

[violetgurl33]

but isnt it the pretty boy sex and shounen-ai that attracts mostly all of us?

yeah, i like this fic too and mostly all the work you've written coconutjack. lost boys is the best in my opinion, hands down=)

this one is also promising and i rly like how the setting is a beach

[thevirginia]

well, yes, but it tends to get old/unrealistic. but that's only my opinion. to each their own.

[coconutjack]

ah, it's to each his own, i would suppose. though i don't deny that the boy-boy attraction IS what keeps the fandom...er...interesting. XD lol.

thank you very much! i like lost boys too <333

[mickey8]

first off...

four years old JunSu is just so very lovely! though there aren't too many descriptions done on him just as yet but the way how he's four, innocent, depending (and having afternoon nap) and all just make him oh, so adorable.

then it's JaeJoong. i don't know if i should feel happy cuz it's a Jae centric (yes, Jae-bias i am! *wiggles eyebrows*) or sad cuz this indeed does make a very sad, depressing and uncute version of JaeJoong. really, how can you make suce 12 years old kid sounds so...solemn? kajdofgiagnfa!~

lastly... ChangMin. really, i'm glad it's not a ghost story *shudders*... but sun kissed skin, chestnut hair, wearing only khaki shorts and with sand all over his sweaty body... BLOODY MURDER ME BEACH BOY CHANGMIN-AHHH!!!

being only the first chap... this is very alluring already. there are just so many things i need to ask. Jae and his mom's relationship. Jae and his DAD's relathionship..and ChangMin. gone with the wind? heh!

really. it's scary how good you're at this...

i ♥

[coconutjack]

it's easy to imagine him as a four-year-old since he still acts cute and kiddie-like up til now. :D he'll unfold more with the chapters.

haha he's a very serious 12yo so far, but i'll soon make him act his age. XD

glad changmin's not a ghost? i am too. lol. XD he's something else though.

thank you very much mickey-sshi! <333

[mickey8]

i'm really anticipating!!! ♥

p/s: ur name? if you don't mind... (cuz sometimes real name CAPS SPAMMING is needed when you're excited). XDDDD

[coconutjack]

LOL i get what you mean.

name: jackie. ;D