A Clear Midnight

Dec 02, 2007 11:10

Title: A Clear Midnight
Character: Jaejoong POV, but includes all the rest
Length: 1/?
Rating/Genre: NC-17 for Jaejoong's language; angst
Summary: Yunho had been the one with the weak stomach and I used to heckle him like a fucker about it.

A/N: I'm a noob, don't be too harsh. ^^ I wrote this like around 3 in the morning so it's a little messed up. It ( Read more... )

ot5, ho, jae

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sirenasfun December 3 2007, 02:35:31 UTC
Ooooooh! Me likey! Very interesting.

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coconutjack December 3 2007, 11:25:54 UTC
thank you!~ ^^

stay tuned for the final chapter! (of which i'm still uncertain what to put in) XD

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chuchama December 4 2007, 21:06:44 UTC
Whoa, this is amazing and interesting and very well-written! You have a lot of talent. :D

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coconutjack December 5 2007, 01:45:51 UTC
XD ack! i'm just a humble writer, but thank you very much!~

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blurmeese December 6 2007, 13:37:33 UTC
*pokes fic, doesn't really dare to go near it fearing it'll bite her*

This is raw. Raw and a great read, a very different take on this pairing and my god, I approve so bad. Great concept with the messages, and it does have a tinge of Cather in the Rye (which I've only read half of in a bookstore) in it. XDD *toddles off to read the next chapter*

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coconutjack December 6 2007, 17:48:32 UTC
lol at your first line. XD don't worry, my fics are good, behaved ones. XD

thanks for the compliments and i'm glad you approve! catcher in the rye is one of my favorite books and i absolutely felt like cussing that day, hence this potty-mouthed jae. ^^

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zhyune June 4 2008, 09:07:32 UTC
DEARIE! Because I'm having withdrawal symptoms while waiting for your APTF epilogue, I've started reading this fic of yours. Goodness I just love the angsty Jaejoongie!
Please let JaeMin get together? EVen though they're brothers XDD♥
Heehee. *bounces to the next chapter*

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otonashi_alice June 27 2010, 03:05:55 UTC
I liked this! It reminds me of Catcher in the Rye a lot. Holden's personality looks good on Jae. :)

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