Lost Boys [4/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: Lost Boys
Character: Changmin-centric, but everyone's going to appear in it.
Length: 4/?
Rating/Genre: PG in general; it's AU haha.
Summary: “You don’t look like you’re from here.”

A/N: I didn't like this chapter but it had to be written. :s Mianhae.

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Four

“YOU!”

There’s a flailing of arms and legs and a scuffle as Yoochun struggles to restrain

Comments

[crimeis]

Oh my god! The sickening intense atmosphere totally had me on the edge of my seat. I'm speechless. I was happy to have received your feedback from my previous comment and thought maybe you might have updated the next chapter. And to my luck, you've updated. I was etching to read something after finishing 'The Bourne Ultimatium' on DVD. Haha. Seriously, this made my night.

Gee, JaeJoong's character, love him! He is utterly just blunt, not caring a crap for the world besides the one he loves. Yunho is insane, forcing himself like that especially when he's sick. Gah, no one is going to end up dying during or at the end of this fiction hmmm? Lol, never mind- surprise me. :DDD I love Junsu's radiating personality- he's seems to smile bright in a dump place. Seriously, JaeJoong even at a bad time he still knows the brand name of a camera. xD Haha he is love. And Changmin makes me want to hug him, the poor boy out in the other side of harsh reality. I want to hug these boys.

Haha this made me laugh - "He probably even eats like a

[coconutjack]

hiiii!~ ^^ i've been updating regularly because i want to finish before my old habit of not finishing kicks in. haha. won't be updating until after new year's though since my family and i are going to celebrate it up in the mountains. but i'll be leaving you guys with one last chapter for 2007. ^^

i can't stop stressing how much i love jae's character. he's just so cool to me. haha. and yunho, yes, yunho is insane even in real life which is why he gets injured all the time >_>. guy needs to know when to give himself a break. junsu's like light. lol. he's just got that shimmer about him. and changmin, well this is going to be a rough ride for him.

i'm going to stop now before i give anything away. ahaha. thanks for the compliments!~ ^^

[chloe1910]

OMG!! I'm feeling a bit sick now too...OMG! The state that they're in is so pitiful....but Iknow this is real and any homeless children and youngsters are currently experiencing their suffering

[coconutjack]

yes they're in a pitiful state but they make do, you'll see. ^^

not telling about the camera but you're warm. jeez you're pretty good at this game. ^^

LOL about the yunjae comments. i'm a bit of a yunjae-er myself.^^

[kurogoma]

You are right, Jaejoong has issues.
What is it about Changmin that reflects itself onto Jaejoong, making him so hostile to the other boy?

Can't wait to find out, or I could be reading too deeply into things and maybe it isn't anything really. I hope Jae warms up to Min soon.

I hope Yunho is ok, nothing life-threatening, or like Min fears that he is dying before him.

[coconutjack]

jae definitely has issues. and you're not analyzing too deep, dear. you're actually on the right track. XD

yunho's ok. for now. i've no plans on being bricked. for now. haha. XD