A Boy and the Sea [4/?]

Jun 23, 2008 18:40

Four

A phone rings the next afternoon and it’s the first time Jaejoong actually notices that there’s a telephone in the house. It’s a squat black thing in the foyer, looking as ancient as the house probably is. Junsu gets to it first, initiating a nonsense conversation (“Hello? Hi. I don’t know, who are you? Heehee”), that makes Jaejoong almost ( Read more... )

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faricsyung June 23 2008, 11:35:51 UTC
Now you got me all worried for little Junsu. ._.
The legends ~ Hmmm.

I'm still trying to figure out things.. LOL.
Need some time - which unfortunately ain't on my side especially these days.

Thanks for this. <3 Glad Jaejoong found a trust in Yoochun. ;D

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coconutjack June 23 2008, 11:42:49 UTC
the legends actually startled me: the longest one yunho's daddy shared rudely reminded me of aptf, which i didn't mean AT ALL. XD well, we'll see.

not much to figure out, i'm afraid. it is as it is. if things are unclear at this point though (which i'm sure they are XD) they'll probably be clearing up in the next few chapters or so. this is a growing-up fic, so watch out for transitions and things. :D

thanks as always, love. <3

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milollita June 23 2008, 12:26:35 UTC
GOOD TO SEE YOU AGAIN BB <3 I was starting to miss you a lot ^^~

Ehh I'm gathering the puzzle pieces and I'm starting to get a picture here. Don't wanna say anything yet but that dream you mention at the end seems to link with the legends and with Changmin too. That's my guess~

Junsu just gets cuter and cuter. Can I keep him? xD

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coconutjack June 24 2008, 00:40:46 UTC
real life is too intrusive. annnd i actually had a hard time formulating this chapter. i think it took me about 5 tries.

well...you ARE right that legends + changmin + dream = something. hahaha. ^^~ but don't think much of it. this isn't going to be rocket science or anything.

*has 4yo junsu hug you*

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thevirginia June 23 2008, 13:53:43 UTC
okay junsu picking up the telephone totally made me squeal; he really is such a cute little thing.
i really like the interaction you have here between the boys -- not overly sweet, really realistic and down to earth imo.
i can't wait to see the next part. i demand some changmin! lols.

And I might have squealed inside when you mentioned Boston College, because -- eee! *goes there* and usually people just name Ivy League schools 8D

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coconutjack June 24 2008, 00:43:58 UTC
my little sister does the telephone thing all the time. annoying actually, but a baby junsu makes it more bearable i think. haha. :D

changmin's appearing next chapter! lol. i missed him too.

AWESOME you go to boston college! my friend went there for a semester for an international exchange program. ^^ he had a great time. i thought BC would be more "real". i mean, not EVERYONE can go to ivy league schools. ^^;;

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thevirginia June 24 2008, 00:45:30 UTC
mah! i tried to resist the cute (b/c i agree about the annoying factor) but oh, su. you evil bundle of cute ;;

YAY! :D

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yuxo June 23 2008, 14:22:45 UTC
Seriously, Su-ah's the most adorable thing on this planet and I want to EAT HIM UP aslkfdjalskdjflkj >_______________________<

That dinner conversation felt so incredibly awkward, omfg. I squirmed around just reading about it. >_<

But this legend is so exciting!! *____* I can't wait for Changmin to make another appearance.

Another great chapter, thank you so much! Looking forward to the next one~ ^3^ ♥

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coconutjack June 24 2008, 00:46:46 UTC
sdubrf09359032u5rnfeiojlnh!
^ (i'm sorry that was 4yo junsu keysmashing his appreciation. XD)

i would feel awkward too during that dinner. haha. poor jae. ><

hehehe changmin's appearing next chapter! i can't keep that boy out for too long.

thanks very much! <333

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kattan69 June 23 2008, 15:06:22 UTC
So I guess either Min is a ghost or one of the sea people...as it seems only Jae saw him and no one else. If the legend is true, I'm a bit worry for Su (being the youngest). But I know Jae will protect his brother when the time comes, if someone else will protect Jae.

This story is getting interesting with the mysterious Min around. Can't wait to read your next chapter...

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coconutjack June 24 2008, 00:50:25 UTC
kattan! whoa, back from hols? :D

min is no ghost. no. no. i'm swearing off ghosts for now. XD haha. no need to worry about su (i think). jaechunho are there. :D

mysterious min appearing soon! :D

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