Comments | cocaineflame: fic: felt almost like a home of sorts or something

cocaineflame

fic: felt almost like a home of sorts or something

Jul 28, 2008 14:48

felt almost like a home of sorts or something
R, jon/spencer. 6,815 words.
story based on and title taken from the temptation of adam by josh ritter. thanks to lessthangreat for holding my hand and being generally awesome.

( jon has been in the silo for forty-three days when he meets spencer. )

ficcage, jon/spencer, writer of fictions

Comments 35

silver_etoile July 28 2008, 19:21:17 UTC

awww it's so cute! i was worried for a second there that it might not be a happy ending, and i hate unhappy endings. but it wasn't so i'm happy!

anyways. um, i like the pace of this actually, how it doesn't all happen at once. the slow build-up and indescisiveness of Spencer and Jon. i really liked it. :D

cocaineflame July 29 2008, 00:15:34 UTC

you know, i was so close to making it, if not an unhappy ending, at the very least more ambiguous. but by the end of it, i was so in love with the characters that i just couldn't do it!

i'm glad you liked it! thank you so much.

lessthangreat July 28 2008, 19:33:09 UTC

YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. UGH. ♥♥♥

cocaineflame July 29 2008, 00:16:15 UTC

YOU KNOW I LOVE YOU LIKE SPENCER LOVES JON IN OUR ICONS. THAT'S A WHOLE LOTTA LOVE, FRIEND. ♥

sweetrecovery July 28 2008, 20:18:03 UTC

Ohhh, this was lovely and achey. I think you paced this really well, and I liked that they just kind of fell (more like stumbled) into their relationship but still had angst and confusion about it. It had just the right amount of angst. You did a beautiful job writing this. And Josh Ritter! <3

cocaineflame July 29 2008, 00:17:56 UTC

thank you! i, ironically enough, spent a lot of time angsting over how much angst there should be, so i'm super happy that it wasn't too much or too little.

<3 josh ritter, indeed! he is such love.

holdmetightx July 28 2008, 20:47:39 UTC

holy crap. that was incredible *___*

cocaineflame July 29 2008, 00:19:01 UTC

omg, thank you. XD

ps, speaking of incredible--your icon. i loves it.

holdmetightx July 29 2008, 00:29:26 UTC

anytime (:

haha, thankyou :D im undeniably proud of that picture, even though it was totally accidental haha.

xsnarkasaurus July 28 2008, 21:03:23 UTC

oh my god, i actually was in tears pretty much the whole fic. I...~flailing~ thank you so much for sharing htis, omg.

cocaineflame July 29 2008, 00:19:39 UTC

i'm a flaily mess myself from these comments! thank you!

xsnarkasaurus July 29 2008, 00:58:28 UTC

~Hugs you~ that was *awesome*. the compliments should be FANTASTIC. :D ♥