Fic: Believing

Feb 03, 2009 17:53

Author: Cobalt Mystic
Title: Believing
Pairing: Spike/Xander
Rating: R
Feedback: Mys has decided that she actually likes FB, so… constructive crit is fine, just be prepared for Mys to defend/explain her choices, and try not to do any permanent damage, k.
Disclaimer: Just playing with the pretty kittens. Unfortunately, they are not mine, but I will ( Read more... )

believing, seeing is believing, spander

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ruefull February 3 2009, 21:49:04 UTC
Oh, lovely! So nicely done, just wonderful! I love it when two insecure people find their true security with each other, and no pair does that as well as this one. And you showed it perfectly!

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cobalt_mystic February 4 2009, 00:00:10 UTC
*nods in full agreement* It's one of the best things about the boys!
*strike 'Aww Schucks' pose* Thank you so much.

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melanie2525 February 3 2009, 23:43:16 UTC
I loved Seeing but this was even better. Loved hearing the thoughts of both boys enraptured. Perfect.

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cobalt_mystic February 4 2009, 00:01:51 UTC
*bounces* Woohoo! It worked! Lol, thanks. Yeah Xan insisted, he just wouldn't leave me alone until I agreed to do this one. I will give him this, he was right, lol.

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cynni13 February 4 2009, 03:29:54 UTC
*Gulp*

*Shivers*

Love it! It was great hearing both boys' thoughts.

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cobalt_mystic February 4 2009, 08:47:08 UTC
*pets* You okay? Lol.

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. *G*

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geek_girl33 February 4 2009, 11:27:14 UTC
that was beautiful. i absolutely love the emotion that you put into your work. everything is so powerful.

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cobalt_mystic February 4 2009, 16:36:21 UTC
Wow! Thanks hun, means a lot. *hugs*

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brianapotter February 5 2009, 04:27:55 UTC
*heaves a deep sigh* Beautiful. The moment when they see it in each other's eyes - lovely! That's a moment I would love to have. To know that someone is that deeply and intensely in love with me...gorgeous. And the sex - hhhooottt!!!

And how is it you manage to hit more of my kinks than anyone else. Spike purring is one of my favorites, but Xander purring is heaven! Thank you for this.

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cobalt_mystic February 5 2009, 23:47:58 UTC
Yeah, think we all need that moment at least once in our lives.
*giggles* Ya know Mys didn't even set out to make this all hot/sexy it just kept getting more intense, lol. Not that Mys is complaining.

As for the kinks- well, that one just turned Mys into an illiterate pile of goo when she thought of it, so she figured it was a safe bet. Any others I couldn't tell ya, lol- hells some of them surprise ME... like the whole pool table thing for example, no clue where it came from but it's been firmly lodged in the kink Closet for almost 3 yrs now, lol.

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brianapotter February 6 2009, 04:43:42 UTC
Oh my, that is another one! Just picturing Spike sauntering (he's gotta saunter) around the pool table and bending over to take a shot! *shivers* Mmmm, that is a fun one. Xander's walk is more of a bounce (at least in my vivid imagination). And he's gotta scratch when Spike does something extremely sexy. *giggles* Yeah, pool's a good one.

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cobalt_mystic February 6 2009, 11:07:29 UTC
Ugh, so true!!!!
' course Mys' brain melts at the scene in SMV- Thirst, when he's being all bossy at Lex and has those jeans and the pool playing! That's actually what Mys was thinking when she started Felt, the first paragraph esp.

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