Lament (Dawn and Spike), PG

[coalitiongirl]

Hey look I wrote something! Un-betaed and short, but it's something, right? :D

Spike and Dawn, right after Showtime. And so now he’s at her side and she’s half-carrying his weight down to the basement, and she wants to rage and hurt him and shout the warnings she’s practiced in front of her mirror all summer.

Comments

[cindergal]

Lovely. I love their relationship so much.

[treadingthedark]

Waaaaahhhhhh!

So beautiful!

[eilowyn]

Guh.

Now I have to go link this to kelpyfinners who promised me she's gonna analyze Spike and Dawn fanfic in her thesis for me.

Oh. And I love you.

[slaymesoftly]

Beautiful. Spike, Dawn friendship is so poignant and real. I love it.

[rebcake]

Oh, sweetie. This is just beautiful! I love how Dawn is pin balling back and forth between her feelings and her thoughts. She's a little bit Buffy, in her belief that there are some feelings she shouldn't have. Or, is that just human? Whichever, it's very, very Dawn. ♥