Last and Alone - Secret Part 8

[cmdrtekk]

 Last and Alone - Secret
Title:  Part 8
Rating:  T
Characters:  Jazz, Perceptor, Slider, the Monolith Team, Monolith
Warnings:  Mech x Mech hinted at/mentioned occasionally
Universe:  G1-ish/ Monolith AU
Disclaimer: I, in no way, shape, or form, own the Transformers© franchise or the characters it contains.  They belong to Has/Tak, No infringement

Comments

[mmouse15]

Actually, the first 2/3 works really well, because it feels like someone rifling through memories - not exactly a continuous flow, but more disjointed and random. And then you get to the first merge and WOW! Totally amazing, so incredible that the voices are like this. It's really well done.

Great chapter from my POV!

[cmdrtekk]

Thank you.

[tainry]

Eeeeeeeee!!! Nice!
Yeah, that merge is really compelling - well done!!!

[cmdrtekk]

Thank you.

[eerian_sadow]

beautiful. just beautiful.

[cmdrtekk]

Thank you for reading and commenting.

[okamichan]

I do see what you mean about the first part, but there's not much you could do about it without dedicating a whole 'nother story to those memories. XD

But I really like that ending :D Just gave me a sense of glee!with that ending line. And the 'Who am I?' stuck in the middle of the dialogue.

[cmdrtekk]

Yeah, as I already mentioned, I'm pretty pleased with the ending scene there.

Better chapter ending than most of the chapters? But them I really pull one of those ending lines in the next chapter. XD

Thank you for reading and commenting.

[snugsbunny]

I read 7 & 8 together, had to know what was happening.

This was amazingly done, i like the way you've done the uplink.

And the first merging, becoming Monolith was excellent XD

[cmdrtekk]

Thanks.