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cmdrtekk

Last and Alone - Secret Parts 1 & 2

Jul 01, 2008 16:45

Title: Last and Alone - Secret
Rating: K+
Characters: Perceptor, Jazz
Warnings: None
Universe: G1-ish/Last and Alone/Monolith
Disclaimer: I, in no way, shape, or form, own the Transformers© franchise or the characters it contains. They belong to Has/Tak, No infringement intended. Any OC’s are to my knowledge are solely mine.
Summary: Perceptor ( Read more... )

'verse: monolith - last and alone, fan fiction, perceptor, transformers

Comments 11

kirin_saga July 2 2008, 02:10:03 UTC

I am so happy you continued this ( ... )

cmdrtekk July 3 2008, 05:01:08 UTC

It's actually interesting writing this as I have created a picture of Perceptors past to work with, yet at this point, for most readers it's as much a mystery to them as it is to Jazz and any other Autobots that I drag in. It surprised me that Jazz was the one to end of pursueing this, because that was so not the original idea I sat down and started to type, but this is what ended up comming out. SO as this seems to be doing it's own thing, we all will have to see where it goes. I hope it continues to be intersting enough to read

Thank you for reading and commenting.

kyra_neko_rei July 2 2008, 04:01:32 UTC

Hmmmm . . . this should be interesting. Continue, please.

Very impressive writing, attention to detail, subtlety, especially where Jazz found the horror on Perceptor's face to be the telling point.

cmdrtekk July 3 2008, 05:02:00 UTC

I hope it continues to be interesting.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

norielit July 2 2008, 04:06:10 UTC

Yes, there's more! I'm afraid that, really, once Perceptor's managed to catch your interest, it's near impossible to make him let it go (for all that he's fairly absent-minded himself.) You just have to learn how to deal with it, sorry. ...Okay, so I'm not sorry. I want you to write more. *blushes* No, that's not a bad thing to admit - neither of them are. It's just Perceptor's magical abilities coming into play ( ... )

cmdrtekk July 3 2008, 05:07:44 UTC

Jazz being the one to start piecing the puzzle together was unexpected for me as well. This was not what I had intended to write when I sat down at the computer. But it's what came out.

As I have said, I got these great character names for this series. I even have there skills laid out to an extent. Now I need to use them somehow. So far these mechs belong to Perceptor, and he's not sharing.

I hope it continues to be interesting.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

mmouse15 July 2 2008, 04:55:41 UTC

Oh Primus. I am SOOO glad you decided to continue this. It's awesome and made of win and OMG fantastic!! I love Perceptor, and this a really great story about him. I love that he 'Lambo twins' Dirge, and that he protects Ratchet, and that he blabs to Jazz who can't let it go because of the look, and I love the Jazz/Ratchet dynamic, and ...

It's all so fantastic I'm gonna go read it again. And then I'm putting it on my e-reader so I can read it more. yesh, that's what I'm gonna do.

Oh, yeah. Almost forgot. More, plz?

cmdrtekk July 3 2008, 05:14:30 UTC

I am thrilled that you enjoyed this. I hope that you continue to do so. THis was not the way I had thought this story to go (Jazz's fault I think, he butted in).

Each new part is a surprise. Part 3 did not go where I thought it was going to. Another charcter butted. Now I have to deal with that.

Again, thrilled you enjoyed. Thank you for reading and commenting.

tainry July 2 2008, 05:34:41 UTC

Oh huzzah!
Go Ratchet! Heee!
That Jazz. <3

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cmdrtekk July 3 2008, 05:14:52 UTC

Thank you for reading.