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cmdrtekk

Bouncing Balls 8

May 13, 2008 07:59

Title: Bouncing Balls 8
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Mirage, Constructicons, Skywarp, Thundercracker, Jazz and Prowl
Universe: G1

Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I, in no way, shape, or form, own the Transformers© franchise or the characters it contains. They belong to Has/Tak, No infringement intended.

Summary: The prank gets in the way and saves ( Read more... )

mirage, 'verse: bouncing balls, fan fiction, constructicons, transformers

Comments 10

dark_daebereth May 13 2008, 14:29:56 UTC

Oh, Prowl's last lines WIN.
Such a roundabout way to prove a point, but damn.

cmdrtekk May 15 2008, 03:27:31 UTC

Thank you.

kyra_neko_rei May 13 2008, 14:33:04 UTC

HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!! Sweet.

cmdrtekk May 15 2008, 03:27:45 UTC

Thank you.

__wilderness__ May 13 2008, 14:47:27 UTC

*snickers* What a fantastic ending!

cmdrtekk May 15 2008, 03:28:49 UTC

Thank you. This was going to be the ending, but along came one last page. Hope you like.

cookiepron May 13 2008, 21:55:51 UTC

That was a wonderful end :D I'm going to be chuckling about this all day. Go Prowl!

cmdrtekk May 15 2008, 03:29:54 UTC

Thank you. This was going to be the end, but along came one more page. It's up now. Not overly great, but hope you like.

mmouse15 May 17 2008, 19:17:52 UTC

I'm so very behind...sorry.

I laughed too hard at this - your description of Mirage's escape was fantastic, and then Prowl actually scores a point over Jazz, and...now I'm off to read the last bit.

cmdrtekk May 17 2008, 21:18:53 UTC

I am pleased that the description for Mirage's escape worked. I again employed one of my favorite tactics that less is more, letting the mind expand on the prompts.

Thank you.