FIC: You Left Me in the Dark [PG13]

[cmdr_jade]

Title: You Left Me in the Dark
Pairing: Leslie/Ben
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 2799
Summary: The first time Leslie notices the way Ben looks at her is the night of the Harvest Festival.
A/N: For Hiatus Fest '11 Prompt #3: Leslie's Turn

Comments

[fairytiger]

OH MY GOODNESS. This was adorable! And the build-up to the kiss was extremely well done. Love it!!

[cmdr_jade]

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[allons_y42]

Wow. That was excellent! The palm reading, the hug, the kiss.... and that conversation with Ron was perfectly in character. A+!

[cmdr_jade]

Thanks so much, I really appreciate it! I'm glad you liked it!

[joirerson]

How sweet and lovely!!! I adored this!!

[cmdr_jade]

Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

[growingonme]

I love your fics, and this one is no exception.

That palm reading scene . . . perfect. :D

[cmdr_jade]

Thank you SO much, that means the world to me! I'm glad you liked it, especially the palm reading. I was pretty partial to it too :P

[chrisfaithalin]

I love Leslie's perspective in this and poor Ben thinking he was being rejected. I love that they both were dejected without each other. Great job.

[cmdr_jade]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I definitely think Ben would be mopey without his Leslie and vice versa.