((OOC: Run on sentences can be useful.))

May 15, 2006 09:28

[In which Kai told me weird visions happen after people mess with Evil!Fred, my town is flooded, school was canceled, and I totally had some time to do some creative writing.  I've only written one actual "dream" post for Cecile ( back in May last year, which was amusing).  Actually written with
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dreams, distress, creative writing, fluttery feelings

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tereeses May 15 2006, 18:53:48 UTC
:DDDD AWESOME job Lisa! I loved how you incorporated all the crazy happenings of the castle into her crazy, wild dream. *snicker - crabs* And I love how it also demonstrates Cecile's worries, fears and insecurities. It was fabulous. Loved it!

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cmdr_cecile May 15 2006, 19:47:41 UTC
((OOC: I'm particularly fond of the one crab Geddoe tried to eat. XDDD

But I greatly appreciate your feedback. It's so much fun to write random things like that, but I wanted to somehow show that her worries and fears are piling up, whether she likes it or not.

Plus I just love character cameos, so I wanted to throw as many in there as possible. :P))

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arrow_feathers May 16 2006, 00:45:58 UTC
(If Hugo knew what Cecile was dreaming about, he would hold her.

And I agree - I really like how you incorporated all the events of the castle into Cecile's dream. And the crabs!)

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cmdr_cecile May 16 2006, 01:22:57 UTC
((OOC: ♥ She would not know what to say.

It was challenging, but ohmygosh lots of fun. I'd love to write more things like this because I can basically get away with almost anything. >>; Dreams are special like that because anything is possible, but the challenge is interpreting why people dream what they do.))

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kilderok May 17 2006, 02:40:07 UTC
Oh well you did an excellently, excellent job my dear lisa!!!! :3 Thats one HELL of a dream, it almost mirrors the insanity that goes on in MY head on a nightly basis! ((The dream I had last night involved me pulling my own molar teeth out by cracking them in two with a small vice. They are REALLY pressurized in real life from my wisdumb teeth, so I'm assuming thats why I was pulling my own teeth out in the dream. O_o The worst part was the reality of it all, I could taste blood, sebastian was there COMPLAINING ABOUT HIS WEIGHT o__O WTH and when I woke up this morning, my teeth HURT BAD. geez...IT WAS BAD. I'LL WRITE ABOUT IT.))

LMAO...eike pwned the fiance with encyclopedias...XDDDD the CRABS....OMG....overload. That was wonderful. I love how you incorporated cecile's knowledge of certain things with eike's lessons. In reference to the dream-death thing. AWESOME. <3 I'm your favorite beta reader? What a compliment! <333

I look forward to reading more of your stories! This was GREATNESS.

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cmdr_cecile May 19 2006, 18:39:04 UTC
((OOC: Since I've already talked with you over AIM about the whole lovely ordeal [except the wisdom teeth! I had no idea you were upset about that, although I can't blame you since I've been having my own anxieties lately. You've had some problems with your teeth in the past, if I remember correctly...? Don't worry about it though!!]

..I thought encyclopedias would be a fitting punishment for someone who cares little for learning? XD;;

♥♥♥ Many hearts for you, Prime Beta Reader­~))

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librarian_eike May 20 2006, 04:40:22 UTC
((OOC: Yuss yuss, that loverly ordeal....OMG these teeth....ack, I don't have ROTTING teeth, they're just too big for my mouth and the pressure...OMG....>__>;; Yeah sucks. And that tooth prob? Yeah you remembered correctly, it was an abscess caused by these wisdom teeth that I had to deal with last time. Anywayyyyssss.....

Oh yes!!! XD;; VERY fitting punishment, especially with eike looming precariously over her shoulder the ENTIRE time I'm sure...XD;;
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The fiance:"...**groan**..ok, I'm done!"

Eike:"**whacks her hand with ruler** You're NOT done...with your studies...YET....."

The fiance:" I've read A-F!!!"

Eike:"You've still got G-Z....plus the dictionary, and thesaurus to complete...and then we'll go to wikipedia....>B-{"

The fiance:"TEH HORRORRRRRR...."

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Ok ok, I'm done.

**blushes from hearts** ; Daww geee))

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cmdr_cecile May 21 2006, 01:55:32 UTC
((OOC: My teeth haven't exactly been my best friends lately either, but yes...

My love for Eike has just kicked up a few more notches. XD Cecile subconsciously loves him FOREVER for pwning The Fiancé~

Shucks~))

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fred_captain May 17 2006, 23:51:23 UTC
(OOC: Waugh, I feel bad, Cecile is traumatized by Fred. ;;;

Though that crab part was funny... I can't wait till Tee sees this... I loved his monosylabbic thing too. XDDD)

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cmdr_cecile May 19 2006, 18:36:34 UTC
((OOC: I wasn't sure if I got the "altar" thing right, but I figured it was worth a try. :D;;

Geddoe's crab-munching is LOVE. ♥;))

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