I can't start things...just finishing them is diffi...

[cluis]

I have decided to give the news letter a rest until I have more free time and some web software to do it right. In it's stead here is and online story I will write until someone tells me to stop. I would appreciate criticism as well as grammar help, and any thing else you all would like to say. Thanks for letting me waste your time. -Management

Pa

Comments

[milzite]

orange tic-tacs...curious....!

[chidee]

of course its a story, and random at that...

"and fucking died right there on the lane...."

[colorm3black]

it's good to see that your finding time to do something creative that isn't designing signs.

Re: "and fucking died right there on the lane...."

[cluis]

i am also spending alot of time on my new web site at www.imlloyd_imjustfuckinsayin-itsgottabelegitimate.org/thought/you/HadThat/Shit.html

So...it's been a month now...

[ambiguousperson]

Did you already give up? You've baited a small audience, now would be the time to take advantage of them. (Take that however you like.) I like the narrator's part, especially with the spelling of Boikett. It will be interesting to see how you develop it.

~Serena ^.~

(See I didn't even say something biased like: I like it! You did it! I like you! Great job!)