Drabble: Chat with Karupin (Prince of Tennis)

Jun 12, 2007 16:29

Title: Chat with Karupin
Series: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Tezuka x Ryoma (if you squint)
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Nope, these characters are not mine.
Author's Notes: This drabble was written last night and revised when it was typed up today. Inspired by the fact that whenever I wanted to talk, but not with friends and family, I 'talked' with my ( Read more... )

drabble, prince of tennis, fanfic, tezuka/ryoma

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litchick87 June 13 2007, 00:24:48 UTC
that was cute! god of tennis... tezuka certainly fits the bill of a patient buddha of tennis

thanks for sharing!

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cloverminx June 14 2007, 16:39:21 UTC
I'm glad you like reading it! I will try to write more TezuRyo stories in the future.

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bookshop June 13 2007, 02:04:29 UTC

AWWWWW. this is so sweet. ♥

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cloverminx June 14 2007, 16:40:53 UTC
Thank you for reading this! I was aiming for reflective, but yeah, it is sweet now that I re-read the drabble.

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devilchilde June 13 2007, 03:37:26 UTC
"Now broadcasting...Tenis no Kami-sama! All hail the great Tezuka! Watch his acolyte Echizen Ryoma pay homage." lols. All that aside this is really sweet. n_n

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cloverminx June 14 2007, 16:43:03 UTC
I'm surprised you found it funny since 'funny' wasn't my primary intention when I wrote this. I'm good at being funny when I don't even try, but when I do try, it ends up not being funny at all. ;_; I hope that makes sense. LOL

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kc_evans June 14 2007, 02:37:42 UTC
What an interesting side of Ryoma you've painted in this drabble! Everyone does need a confidante and Ryoma turning to Karupin is exactly what I would imagine as well. It was a lovely scene you created, and the mention of Tezuka as a god of tennis was both sweet and hilarious. And then adding Ryoma's determination to beat Tezuka was the perfect touch to the "conversation."

Lovely job! Thanks for sharing!

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cloverminx June 14 2007, 16:52:52 UTC
I wanted to capture the moment in its briefness; that's why I wrote it in drabble form rather than stretching it out into a full-fledged fic.

I never realized that mentioning Tezuka as a god of tennis was funny. That thought randomly came up into my head one day. Because in the anime, Tezuka always emit a golden glow or a swirling vortex of power. And in the current manga chapters where he is at the center of attention, he sparkles! *_* But now that I think about it, it is funny! I love it when people finds what I do/write funny even when it wasn't my intention. I am funny when I don't try to be, it seems. ^_^

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kurorinslvr June 14 2007, 04:00:24 UTC
that was really cute, simple but cute

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cloverminx June 14 2007, 16:54:14 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I wanted to make it simple on purpose.

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