Comments | clouds_sky_high: Ramen Boy [Minho/Jinki, PG-13; Oneshot]

vanilachocopie in clouds_sky_high

Ramen Boy [Minho/Jinki, PG-13; Oneshot]

Mar 15, 2011 23:16

Title: Ramen Boy
Status: One-shot
Word Count: 2,771
Pairing: Minho/Jinki
Genre: Crack, fluff, romance
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Minho finds the boy who serves him ramen, rather attractive. An odd, but congenial choice.
A/N: the story plot is kinda fast. just warning :P

( He gritted his teeth, chewing rather pugnaciously when Taemin leaned in and whispered into Jinki’s ear. Kibum snorted beside him. )

!one-shot, fandom: shinee, rating: pg-13, pairing: minho/jinki

Comments 14

volatileflame March 16 2011, 04:12:03 UTC

the story was cute : )

but . . . erm, your choice of words sometimes is a little awkward, like: Minho sneered>. "Of course I want to." ~ a sneer is more of a mocking smile, like, you'd sneer at someone when you're making fun of them or challenging them. it has a bit of a negative connotation. just thought i'd point that out.

vanilachocopie March 16 2011, 04:22:33 UTC

thank you.
Haha I sort of wanted to write Minho kind of obnoxious in this, but I never really did, so I just wanted to add some... ummm, attitude? haha XD

thank you for reading :)

thpeekaboo March 16 2011, 05:06:01 UTC

Aw, this fic was so cute. xD I personally liked tofuho a lot more now, and I was glad that there's this new cute fic of them up~~~ <3
Kibum is always a win, with the sudden random question of "what did you get for question 5" XD. it's not going to get continued? o_o

Thanks for writing this~ <3 I like it :D

my inner fangirl actually acted up when jonghyun hugged jinki XD stupid me XDDD

vanilachocopie March 16 2011, 05:23:18 UTC

lol, I actually liked them too (from reading a fanfic XD). I'm glad you like it~! I always imagine Kibum the cute hilarious one XD. i thought about writing a sequel, but with Jongkey or another pairing.

Your welcome and thank you~!!!! C: Thanks for reading :D

thpeekaboo March 16 2011, 05:26:07 UTC

I could picture the sequel with Jongkey XD If there's gonna be a sequel, I'll be sure to read it! :3
tofuho hwaiting~ xD

vanilachocopie March 16 2011, 05:31:48 UTC

I've never actually writen jongkey but I really do like them together. Haha, really? Glad to hear that :D
yes hwaiting~ <3

7nyy March 16 2011, 19:37:17 UTC

I like it
was cute ^^

vanilachocopie March 16 2011, 20:32:54 UTC

Thank you :3

hahappyness March 16 2011, 22:28:09 UTC

Aw, this was really cute. I loved it~ ♥

vanilachocopie March 16 2011, 22:34:45 UTC

Thank you so much~! :D glad you enjoyed it ♥

lisis_miyu March 17 2011, 02:55:51 UTC

It was really cute! I Love OnHo seriously n_n

But the end was a kinda... open? I really love to think that you maybe gonna make a continuation jeje but even is it not, you let us use imagination... good~~

Thanks for share n_n

vanilachocopie March 17 2011, 03:48:55 UTC

THank you~! I do too! :D
I'm still not sure if I'm going to write a sequel or not, but I might.

Thanks for reading :)