[Fanfic] Blessings

[cloudedge]

Title: Blessings
Claim: Shinn Asuka x Cagalli Yula Athha
Theme: Set #2 - 32 - Self-Esteem
Genres: Romance, Angst
Pairings: Shinn x Cagalli, subtle implication of KiraCaga and KiraShinn
Word Count: 2088
Rating: PG
Summary: At least in front of him, she has to fake her confidence. She would rather die than to let him know how he shakes her world.

Comments

[angrycherokee]

He pulls the zipper up slowly, closing off her skin inch by inch, covering his privileged view of her undergarment. The short journey up her spine feels like eternity, yet eternity is but a mere second. If only eternity can last longer.

Eeee! Makes me shiver, in a good way :D Lots of KiraCaga in this. Made me wonder if it was longing KiraCaga instead of ShinnCaga xDDD
Very incredibly subtle KiraShinn, too. Seems more like friendship on the surface, but more underneath... Hehe.

I like it. And I blushed extremely when you dedicated it to me *more blushing*

[cloudedge]

heehee i'm glad you like it ^^;
Yeah I know... the KiraCaga is quite heavy >.>; I couldn't help it... I mean who else can Cagalli turn to when she's down XDDDD

lol, the KiraShinn... there's technically none there >.> other than the last line lol XD but I just have to put it in there ^^

I just realize that there's no "main character" in this fic just like Destiny lol~ It kind of started off with Shinn... and ended up with Kira taking over lol~

[onirei_kirara]

This was lovely! It just--well, what I liked most about it was all the different relationships. It seemed very real. ^_^ *goes to re-read*

Hey, I saw the Kira/Shinn! X3

[cloudedge]

heehee ^^ thanks I'm glad you like it (I was worrying that this drabble won't get more than 1 comment ; ; lol)
It was really fun writing ShinnLuna, KiraCaga and KiraShinn here under the premise of ShinnCaga :) The pov shifted from Cagalli in the beginning to Kira in the end... I did that because I wanted to show Shinn on the top for once lol ^^; I have read/written enough fic that shows how Shinn loves Cagalli... here I wanted to show the reverse... that their relationship is balanced ^^; So I try to tell Shinn's feeling though Kira, who for 1/3 of the time was preoccupied drooling over Cagalli lol XDDD

I guess it's fine though~ lol KiraCaga or ShinnCaga, it doesn't really matter - it serves its purpose as a document of how ShinnCaga evolve, and that's all I care. :) It was my intent (as this is dedicated to angrycherokee) to draft some complicated relationships here :) At this arkward time, when Shinn is still in a lingering relationship with Luna while falling in love with Cagalli... and Cagalli feeling threatened by Luna and seeking refuge to

[onirei_kirara]

0_o Wow. *in awe of your awesome devotion*

XD