This is why I don't write poetry.

[cloudcafe]

Comments

[ornatelock]

it's not bad, it's just one those that's a form of narration.

i cannot see the true face of your phantoms. but. being haunted is something i empathize with.

[cloudcafe]

Hmm, I had in mind a simple sort of ghost; just eyes. The rest (if any) concealed in dark.