badly kept promises and lies well spoken
rating: g?
characters: sarah & sara
a/n: let's assume that sarah actually owns the orange orange because why the fuck would she just be working there while driving a porsche and that she actually has a real place to live instead of a hotel room for two years and only gets actual accommodations that facilitate long term living after she moves in ( Read more... )
characters: sarah & sara
a/n: let's assume that sarah actually owns the orange orange because why the fuck would she just be working there while driving a porsche and that she actually has a real place to live instead of a hotel room for two years and only gets actual accommodations that facilitate long term living after she moves in ( Read more... )
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It has been read. It has been enjoyed. It has been laughed at, but in the good way, not in the way where I mock people over at ff.net for their failings. Thinky thoughts have been thought up but I also have worked way too many hours staring at large blocks of text tonight and thus will sleep first in the hopes of coherence come morning.
If this was AO3, this would be me pressing the kudos button prior to reviewing.
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Ahem. So. Not speaking of the lateness of this comment at all.
“So, if you’re not here because you’re rooting for Chula Vista, what are we doing here?”
“Talking.”
“We’re not doing too good a job of that.”
“Give it some time.”
Love love love that you opened this at a Little League game and then killed at dialogue right off the bat. I know you say your Sarah is probably overly sassy, but these lines (and this scene) in particular read very well in my head. I also love the detail about Sarah stealing Sara's cap (that's a really weird sentence to write with those names, wow, man, I feel for you), mostly because in my head it implies that meeting at games is a ~thing with them.
“Here,” Sara says while handing over the beer cup after taking a sip herself, “you probably need all of that and then some after admitting that you could do better with me. I’ve heard you asking for help from me before and I have never once heard you say anything close to that. Must’a hurt.”Cause god knows Sarah hates asking for help. I didn't ( ... )
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Other times, she’s content to sit on the couch playing Cooking Mama or something on Sarah’s uncharacteristically baby pink DS - another lovely gift from Chuck.
He doesn't get her AT ALL. Of course he bought pink. Not even hot pink, baby pink. It's a ~girl color, and she should get in touch with her ~feminine side like a ~normal girl. This fills me with rage. The image of Sarah and Sara playing video games with each other however makes me a happy camper.
Normally, she would leave, kind of sneak away or something in the middle of the night. Her stuff fits in a small enough duffle bag and if she really didn’t want to go through the hassle, she could leave all of it behind without caring too much about it. But this is different, she internally berates herself, she can’t pick up and leave because this is Sarah and she promised.Ugh, bored to tears and yet still cannot force herself out the door because Sarah actually means something to her, whether she wants to vocalize it or not, and ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Also, omg the lock combo ( ... )
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