Comments | closet_bound: Wrong

closet_bound

Wrong

Aug 08, 2006 20:38

Title: Wrong ( Read more... )

Comments 7

anansay August 9 2006, 02:11:14 UTC

I really like how you've meshed the narrative with the dialogue. Very striking, and powerful.

I'm really liking these short fics you've been posting. Just enough of a taste to keep me going.

closet_bound August 9 2006, 07:02:54 UTC

thank you. glad you like them:) *hugs* i'm singing random songs. drunkeness can be fun every now and then:)

meredyth_13 August 9 2006, 02:30:10 UTC

Very, very nice. Concise, tight, and yet... no more needs to be said.

:D

closet_bound August 9 2006, 07:01:50 UTC

thank you")

canonball13 August 9 2006, 04:53:30 UTC

Wow. I really like it. It took four tries, and I think I understand who dies. I think. Anyways, awesome, awesome, awesome. =)

closet_bound August 9 2006, 07:00:13 UTC

thank you:)

mordyn4 August 9 2006, 15:17:29 UTC

Okay, once I figured it out (and if I had just relaxed and went with it, I would have sooner) I thought it was really cool.

BTW, I really like it that you're around more. :D