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Nov 18, 2008 03:51

( occ:A small fic/drabble to explain Hakuba’s situation and psychology at the moment, and to help with the future events on the Pandora’s plot :3 comments are welcome~)

There was a resounding sound and a cold sensation that interrupted his thoughts. Hakuba turned back to face the now open window of his room. He paused, resting the cup of tea he'd ( Read more... )

hakuba, doyle, thinking too much, pandora's plot, drabble

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peoplesprincess November 18 2008, 03:08:26 UTC
FORGOT TO SAY THIS IN THE EMAIL- you're a very good writer. :D

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clockmaster November 18 2008, 03:11:25 UTC
LOL XDDD thanks

You're an awesome beta, thanks a lot for the help :D

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clockmaster November 18 2008, 13:13:15 UTC
Do you think so? well our little blondie is fun to write, I'm glad to know it was on character and all :3

Doooo it! I love to read your drabbles too :3

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clockmaster November 18 2008, 14:32:23 UTC
*squeeee* thankkkkks! ~I 'm alway thinking about why he does what he does and his mental discussions about Kid~heh.

>:3 yays

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wannabesanta November 18 2008, 04:08:40 UTC
You amaze me with your writing, you know? :3

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clockmaster November 18 2008, 13:14:37 UTC
@^___^@ thanks babe!! I will probably write one about Elphaba and jack relationship summmmday too :3

Azulas' mun helped me with the gramma mistakes, thanks to god, ehehe.

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wannabesanta November 18 2008, 15:53:12 UTC
Welcome and yay ~

How nice of her <3

Is working on your tag >.>

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clockmaster November 18 2008, 15:55:28 UTC
:333333

yus!

No hurry!!!

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karates_doors November 18 2008, 05:46:36 UTC
"Kudo, on the other hand, was a fighter.... hmm... "

Technically not nearly as much as Ran, but he'll never admit that. |D

This was wonderful. ♥

(One thing, though! Peaked --> piqued. Peaked means to have reached the top point of something -- peaked the mountain, his anger peaked. Piqued means like pricked, or to raise slightly or catch one's attention.)

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peoplesprincess November 18 2008, 06:09:17 UTC
... And apologies for not catching the peaked/piqued thing when I edited the piece for you, Hakuba-mun! D:

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karates_doors November 18 2008, 06:15:22 UTC
It's okay, it's a very popular mistake. I'm just anal. XD;

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peoplesprincess November 18 2008, 06:16:18 UTC
XD I'm usually pretty anal, too- and I know the difference, so I really should have caught it. Pfffft. >.>

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