Part 6

[clockstopper]

Comments

[mourning_night]

Very cute story. I thought it was really impressive how many bandom characters you worked into one story. My favorite part was how Brendon and Jon had a relationship that looked so steady but wasn't really confident yet it was what managed to push Ryan and Spencer into doing something about their own issues. The easiness between Gerard and Frank's long term relationship and the newer ones, especially William's and Gabe's, was very well done. You've got a deft touch as a writer for giving a lot of detail without seeming to be dumping it onto the reader. I find the mentions of Ray and Brian interesting and wish (maybe selfishly on my part) that I could have seem more of them.

[mayqueen517]

I'm so pleased to see how this finished up, and god, it was worth the anticipation. Beautifully done with the characters and I really do admire the fact that it doesn't sound or seem forced. I love how Gabe and William drifted together, along with Spencer and Ryan. Jon and Brendon's relationship was very enthralling in the problems and the way that Jon just doubts himself so much. I love Brendon's total faith in Jon, and it's so heartwarming. There's a reason I picked 'Little Wonders' for the Jon and Tom scene, because you really made that friendship come through in a small amount of words

[onigaminanashi]

Oh my lord. Set Chicken! PAs all named Alex except for Ian who's strangely disgruntled to be called an Alex! Sex! Angst! Oh man. I don't even know how to say how awesome this was. Also, I may or may not have disturbed my roommates to the point of bad things by laughing my ass off at Spencer playing a woman which, if I may say, was fucking INSPIRED. I've told, like everyone I know to stick this up next in their BBB reading list.

So much awesome, I don't even know how to say. ♥

(I didn't even know you wrote bandom! I thought you were SGA and Torchwood and stuff! This is awesome!)

[seratonation]

*FLAILS* that was awesome! omg so worth the wait! i'm so glad you fixed jon and brendon! and the spencer/ryan was perfect! and omg your pete voice!! and like nate and alex were so cute! and the alexes and cash and ian! and just *flails* so much my face -> :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

(and lol spencer he girl! he's got the hips for it!)

also also, i liked teh interactions between them all, just a lot of things i wouldnt have thought of but were awesome, the frank and spencer being married on the show, mikey and ryan and ashlee working togethee, sean continuesly hitting on brendon, and the bob and mike stare down XD and the gerard fanboying over pete and then them becoming friends \o/\o/\o/ i loved it!

[totaled]

i really liked this! it was so interesting to read, really, and even though there were some grammatical things that took away from the story, it was still a good concept and you wrote it well. good job :)