‘They’ve blended into the background at this point.’

[clez]

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[behindtonsils]

So Loreley is perfect in this; I really really love the half smile at the end lmao, she so knows what's going on and I get the sense that no one can keep a secret around her in that station. I also really love that you demonstrate the fact that they don't need to speak rather than just telling the reader, like when he splits the orange and offers her a piece it makes it so clear that they're really close and shows how little they need to speak to communicate. I can see Lore barely even looking, just like taking it while she's watching the room. MORE ♥.

[clez]

Omg this comment made me so happyyyyy :D ♥ I'm so glad I got Loreley right in that way, I just got this really strong impression that, like you say, no one can keep a secret from her and she always knows what's really going on with all these people; she spends so much time around them for one thing but I just imagine she's so good at reading people slfkjlr. And I'm so pleased you like the little detail with the orange omg ♥ That was the strongest mental image I had for this fic so having you pick up on it just made me squeal a bit :D THANK YOU BB ♥! And expect more soon :>