Comments | clez_fics: “We have to check it out.”

clez in clez_fics

“We have to check it out.”

Aug 18, 2012 01:57

( the broken radio was playing suicide )

character: billy defeo, character: mia gillespie, game: brutality

Comments 7

behindtonsils August 18 2012, 21:54:41 UTC

NO BUT YOU CAN'T ACTUALLY LEAVE IT THERE.

clez August 18 2012, 22:59:49 UTC

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behindtonsils August 19 2012, 18:57:02 UTC

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behindtonsils August 24 2012, 20:16:54 UTC

Okay but no here's a real comment now that i can be a bit more coherent about this. I was not expecting a coven to show up at the end of this, I really loved that twist, but most of all I really loved the dialogue and interaction between Mia and Billy, particularly when she's following him into his apartment and looking at the footage, and trying to get him to slow down and explain what's going on to her. In generally I just really like this, I mean it's a horrible situation for them to be in but it was so fun to read.

behindtonsils August 24 2012, 20:18:24 UTC

But seriously the cliffhanger ending. NO. 8(.

clez August 27 2012, 21:56:34 UTC

THIS IS ME WE'RE TALKING ABOUT, HEZ ;D I live for the cliffhanger ending, you know this.

clez August 27 2012, 21:56:03 UTC

I was kind of drawing on the epic AU you played with for Keegan and Nerys, which is honestly like one of my favourite things ever, so I was really hoping you would enjoy the coven aspect, even if it is a giant bag of HOLYSHIT. And I'm so relieved re: Billy and Mia and their dialogue and basically everything at the beginning, because I had this whole big frustrated flap about it dragging on too long and getting too bogged down in unnecessary chatter and padding, SO YAY ♥ I just loved the idea of Billy marching around doing his own thing and Mia telling him to slow the heck down, I could picture it so well in my head. I'm just really glad you enjoyed this, bb! :D ♥!