“It’s… wrong, whatever it is.”

Mar 26, 2009 15:57


NOTES: Part Six of Heroes Live Forever. Faaaaaail, this part isn’t very good :/ I wrote it in two sittings, and leaving it a couple of days didn’t help either. Le suck. Title is from Supermassive Black Hole by Muse.

under false pretences )

character group: cole's pack, series: heroes live forever, game: brutality

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behindtonsils March 26 2009, 17:48:10 UTC
Omg I don't even know what you're talking about I love this part. The dynamic of Dia, Steven and Nerys is so awesomesaldkjfh. AND. I love how you wrote Nerys too ♥!

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clez March 26 2009, 18:08:22 UTC
Omgggggg, I don't even need to tell you how nervous I get writing Nerys. So. Daunting ;__; But I love her ♥ Soomgyay, that is such a relief, and I'm so glad that you approve/like! And lskehgrekjghskjehn thankyouwtffff.

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vampyric_lycan March 26 2009, 18:38:32 UTC
I don't know what you're talking about, but I see no fail here! I absolutely love Dia's voice in this chapter, and her interaction with the seniors, especially. You done good, dude!

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clez March 26 2009, 18:45:32 UTC
*mcflaaaaaaail* Gaaaah, thank you, duuuuuude. NowI'mgoingtohide.

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nentikobe March 26 2009, 19:42:04 UTC
I see no fail. Granted I'm reading this at bloody 20 minutes to 7am, but I decided to.

Keep it going!

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clez March 26 2009, 19:47:48 UTC
I shall keep going! Thanks, Nenti ♥

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