I fully expected that it would be awesome, and it is, but it's so much more gripping than I anticipated. I could almost feel the heat around him as Cole was fighting to get out alive.
Also, Heidimuse is excessively satisfied by her role in the story, even though she's not actually there. XD
:D! Thank you so much! ♥ As you know, I appreciate the feedback, and I just smiled like a freak >.> Hehehe *is a nerd* Again, thank you! And I was hoping you'd like Heidi's feature, even if it's not a literal, physical one ;)
:D Thank you, Thozzy! *snugs* Much appreciated, as always.
Cole says of course he's going to defend his family ;) And Jaden took younger members who would be easier to sway >.> Ummm, let's see *digs out age list* (Don't ask me how slimy Jaden knew who was younger - you can sense it? I don't know >.>) People like Mara (who nentikobe and I decided had her arm broken while trying to defend others), Matt, a few of 'The Brood' and maybe Toby and Madison. Youngsters! Innocent ones! Um, yes XD
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Also, Heidimuse is excessively satisfied by her role in the story, even though she's not actually there. XD
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Go Cole, defending his family, this just makes me want to know more about what Jaden did and who he took.
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Cole says of course he's going to defend his family ;) And Jaden took younger members who would be easier to sway >.> Ummm, let's see *digs out age list* (Don't ask me how slimy Jaden knew who was younger - you can sense it? I don't know >.>) People like Mara (who nentikobe and I decided had her arm broken while trying to defend others), Matt, a few of 'The Brood' and maybe Toby and Madison. Youngsters! Innocent ones! Um, yes XD
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