Comments | clez_fics: ‘Had he lied… or had they gotten something wrong?’

clez in clez_fics

‘Had he lied… or had they gotten something wrong?’

Jan 28, 2007 00:28

( i had to fall )

character: marcus rivera, challenge: 10 prompts, game: brutality

Comments 6

ladynorbert January 28 2007, 01:03:37 UTC

O_O

Well, gah.

Brilliant though.

clez January 28 2007, 01:17:11 UTC

>.>! Many thanks! I suppose Marcus just wouldn't be one of my guys if I didn't put him in this kind of near-death-ish situation, heh XD

behindtonsils January 28 2007, 01:06:00 UTC

O.O! OMG. I... have very few words. I sort of stared at the screen when I finished reading and... blinked and.. OMG.

Kathmuse is ballistic now I hope you realise. Dude. Amazing ficlet, even if it does make Kath and I FLAIL!

clez January 28 2007, 01:23:11 UTC

FLAIL! >.> I... am so meeeeeean >.> I'm sorry! XD Seriously though, thank you. I'm kinda happy it made you flail, because getting reactions is... of the good.

Marcmuse kinda hates me right now, but there you go. He... will get used to angst. Or he should, heh. Thank you again!

super_six_one February 1 2007, 02:34:09 UTC

So I'm not at all familiar with the storyline, but even so...very intense story. Had a sort of Homicide feel to it, which it difficult to capture when writing about cops, especially when said cops are original characters. Bravo, hon.

clez February 1 2007, 02:39:40 UTC

Wow :D First of all, I'm always taken by surprise when people I don't know (even if only in an online fashion) comment on my work, but thank you so much :) I really appreciate the comment, and I'm glad you could appreciate it without knowing about the 'world' or the character himself. I think you just made my night XD