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Jul 03, 2010 00:19

More Jensen/Danneel, because i just can't seem to get enough of them! <3

Title: Lying Safe Here in Your Arms
Author: CleverCookie10
Rating: PG
Genre: Schmoop, DatingFic,
Warnings: Mentions of people falling to their death, blood, again, its Jensen/Danneel so you know, if you don't like don't be reading!
Summary: Jensen notices that there's something ( Read more... )

jensen/danneel dating_fic, schmoop

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izzychase July 4 2010, 14:34:20 UTC
Hey!

So glad you wrote for this prompt- yay!

I thought this story was so lovely- it showed Danneel's more vulnerable side and Jensen is so sweet to her. I can imagine him being that reassuring and nice in real life, too. I like how you portrayed their relationship and I'm glad you decided to write again! ;)

Izzy

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clevercookie10 July 5 2010, 13:39:32 UTC
Hey!

Aw, thank you *blushes* I have another half finished one, where Danneel's comforting Jensen, i just haven't had time to get round to it again XD

Your so sweet! I'm really glad you liked this <3

I hope the next prompt will be as easy as tht one was lol

Thanks again!

<3
x

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elsewhere_kels July 12 2010, 00:16:19 UTC
This was so sweet. :) Thank you for submitting it! You may want to think about cutting down on the pet names - he doesn't actually call her "Danneel" once through the whole first section and it got a little distracting for me. I love how you focused on the way Danneel doesn't NEED Jensen even though she wants him. The banter at the end was adorable and I was giggling out loud!

Love seeing your contributions - keep up the great work!

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clevercookie10 July 12 2010, 12:14:06 UTC
Hey!

Thank you :) I hadn't even noticed the pet name thing! Thank you for poiting it out, it's duley noted :)

Well, from what i've read in interviews with her, she's a very independant woman, i kinda figured she'd be in this more because she wants to be than she needs to be :)

thank you so much for commenting! =D

I have a hurt/comfort Jensen story too, its nearly finished i know the prompts passed, but would it be alright to link it in along side the next prompt fic i do too?

Thanks Again!

<3
x

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elsewhere_kels July 12 2010, 21:39:24 UTC
Oh, absolutely post a link! The more the merrier. ;) I'm glad you're enjoying yourself!

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