Together (oneshot)

[cleotine]

Title: Together
Pairing: Ohmiya
Rating: G
Genre: Romance, Angst (maybe???)
Length: ~2.300 words
Disclaimer: Though I wish otherwise, Arashi owns me not vice versa
Summary: After the publication of the infamous ‘Nino is a sexual powerhouse’ article, Ohno is at a loss how to comfort him.
A/N: Oh.My.God. I’m so nervous because this is the 1st time ever I’m

Comments

[eru_tan]

This was absolutely amazing for your first work. And actually would still have been even if it wasn’t the first.

I took a little risk when opening this, because usually all that new writers pull out is a clichéd, 700 words max piece of poor typing where everyone and everything is as OOC as it gets.

Your work, however, is quite the opposite. I was particularly pleased with the way you managed to bring out both of the boys’ real characters (especially Ohno’s, and he’s a hard one, IMO), instead of just giving their names to total OCs. At least this is how I imagine them to be in reality.

The language was also good. Despite not being a native English-speaker myself, I still enjoy good grammar, and my eyes caught very few mistakes in this one.

The story itself also had a nice and realistic feeling in it that carried out exemplarily through the whole thing.

Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed this and would like to read more from you in the future :)

[cleotine]

Oh my, now you've got me blushing...
Thank you so much for that lovely comment. If I get some inspiration, I'll try to write more ^^;

[ramen_lover30]

the story is cute.... so cuteeee!! <3
Thanks for sharing! I'm looking forward to see your next fic :3

[cleotine]

Thank you!
I hope I'll get an idea for writing sth new soon, too ^^;

PS: Our icon is awesome, lol

[rio_sora]

so sweet and lovely~full of love! thanks a lot! ganbatte for next fic, u did well^^

[cleotine]

Thank you for commenting!
I'll try my best for another fic ^-^

[vintenson]

This is really good!
awww i love them both! poor nino :( but im glad oh-chan could make him feel better! :)

[cleotine]

Thank you!
I hope Oh-chan could lift Nino's spirits like this ^^;

[cleotine]

Thank you for reading and commenting!