Air Apparent (1/1)

May 19, 2010 23:28


Air Apparent
Older Kids
Genre: Gen, Drama, Friendship, Humor
Warnings: Mild language
Timeline: Season Three
Synopsis: A new planet has both Sam and Daniel eager to explore, but is it as harmless as it seems?
Notes: Written for this quarter's one_prompt challenge "Breathe".  I borrowed Nirrti's gene splicer to merge three different plot bunnies into a single ( Read more... )

timeline: season 03, genre: drama, character: daniel jackson, character: jack o'neill, character: samantha carter, character: teal'c, genre: humor, pairings: gen (no pairings), genre: challenge, challenge-giver: one_prompt, timeline: classic team, genre: friendship

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suzannemarie June 1 2010, 18:23:50 UTC
This was a pleasure to read.

I had in mind to include a vignette in mine that had a distantly similar theme as yours. But it was distinctly lower brow. Since yours is so nicely done, I'm especially glad I didn't spend much time trying to work out my own.

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cleothemuse June 1 2010, 19:26:44 UTC
Nonsense, I'm sure it would have been just fine!

Three separate plot bunnies came forward for this prompt: a humorous story in which Jack reminded Daniel to "breathe" between fits of archaeological ecstasy, an angsty tale in which Daniel had an allergic reaction to something and couldn't breathe, and a crack!fic involving a skunk. Nirrti's gene splicer came in REAL handy for combining the three :)

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traycer_ June 1 2010, 18:59:53 UTC
Hee! A skunk story - and yeah, some groans at Jack's skunk jokes. LOL This was really great! :)

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cleothemuse June 1 2010, 19:22:57 UTC
Poor Jack... he likes the lines of good and bad to be as clear as black and white ;)

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colej55 June 1 2010, 19:49:41 UTC
This is great! Perfect characterizations and a lovely sense of humor. I enjoyed it immensely! :-)

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cleothemuse June 1 2010, 21:43:39 UTC
Thanks! My brain demands angst, but my fingers type humor regardless.

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sg_fignewton June 2 2010, 14:09:08 UTC
Hee! Oh, this was fun! Best line is a tie: Sam's suggestion that Daniel can use itty bitty words to explain things and turning your little furry friend's butt into a biological weapon. :)

Also, I am highly amused that while Jack accused Daniel of his lack of caution, he was the one who got skunked!

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winterstar95 August 11 2011, 20:39:35 UTC
Pretty cute! Thanks for sharing.

Donna aka winterstar

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