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Bedtime Snack (1/1)

Oct 25, 2008 02:02

Bedtime Snack
Rating: Adult
Genre: Multiples (Jack/Daniel/Vala), Established Relationship, PWP, Romance
Timeline: Post-series
Warnings: Smut
Synopsis: Part of the impromptu dajava wedding round robin. Anyone up for a snack?
Notes: Technically the fifth ficlet in the series, as someone much better at porn should definitely write the scene between " ( Read more... )

pairings: multiple (jack/daniel/vala), character: vala mal doran, warnings: adult content, genre: romance, timeline: post-series, character: daniel jackson, character: jack o'neill, genre: established relationship, communities: dajava, genre: pwp

Comments 16

advection October 25 2008, 22:04:53 UTC

Hot 'n' happy, lovely combo. :-)

cleothemuse October 27 2008, 05:04:16 UTC

Thanks! They're just so yummy...

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cleothemuse October 27 2008, 05:03:34 UTC

Smart, sexy, and funny... those three words could be used to describe any member of this OT3, or all of 'em at the same time! :D

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cleothemuse October 31 2008, 03:20:33 UTC

Oh, REEEEEEEEally? *can't wait*

missimae2u November 1 2008, 02:56:38 UTC

wowsa....i've been following the trail of hotness that lead to this and wow....just wow.....
this was great.....

campylobacter October 11 2009, 08:48:09 UTC

OMFG, I can't believe I hadn't left feedback for this -- it's one of the 1st DaJaVa fics I'd ever read that got me hooked on the OT3.

It's also the fic that firmed my resolve to never write Daniel/Vala married until Prop 8 is repealed in my home state of California.

cleothemuse October 11 2009, 09:07:03 UTC

LOL! The first time I ever tried my hand at smut, too...

Writing D/V smut with out them being (or getting) married would be a lot easier if Daniel didn't insist on trying to "make an honest woman" out of Vala.

Pfft. As IF.

campylobacter October 12 2009, 02:39:54 UTC

Bwa ha! Yes! "Honest" is so relative where dear our Vala is concerned.

I look at it this way: anthropologically, Daniel's seen enough of the universe to take a circumspect view on marriage as a social institution to control mating access to females, and given that Vala's previous marriages didn't mean much to her, he might not want to impose a social construct on a relationship that spans the universe and ostensibly is most meaningful to only the parties involved. Therefore a "marriage" on Earth isn't meaningful to me for Daniel & Vala unless Jack can be an equal legal partner.

So I place your wonderful smutfic on a utopia of planet named "Over the Rainbow", which I hope one day will come to pass -- in my lifetime -- on this very planet. :-D

(sez the fangrrl happily married to her X-Files fanboi for 7 years & counting)