The Cost Of Regret Updated And Revamped A Fair Bit (Worksafe so far...I think...)

[cleoius]

So...Ideally I would like to post my Voltron works to my archive account. But...i have changed as a writer, hopefully improved some, so that means I want my old fics to try and reflect my quality NOW. So I am slowly trying to fix them up. Only...it went beyond a few typos, and I did some actual rewriting...still the same story. but hopefully

Comments

[xearthfaex]

Jeez! Lotor you have become one cold S.O.B. It is interesting to see how he has changed over the years from a love struck prince to a hardeneed emperor and how that has changed him.

But still he is thinking of Allura too much. He is enjoying it too much. Despite all the outward appearances, I still think he desires her. He just is on too much of a power high to realize it.

The writing is wonderful, as always. I love the tension you create here.

[cleoius]

Oh thank you! This was such a pleasant surprise to find you had read it. Thank you so much!

Yes he is cold and mean, and someone else commented and said something like they are getting freezer burn from Lotor. that's how cold his anger is! XD

Yes, I think one of the runninng themes is Lotor being in denial about just how much he still wants and feels for Allura...thinks about her. 8nods*

[xearthfaex]

Yes, definitely freezer burn here!

Yes, he is denial, so bad. The fact he takes so much pleasure in it and still takes Allura's offer shows that she is still on his mind.