The Last Straw (SPN, gen) Sam, Dean

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Title: The Last Straw
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam, Dean (gen)
Warnings: evil Sam, minor OC death
Word count: 815
Rating: R
A/N: Written for the Evil!Sam Roulette challenge at evilsam-spn, for the song prompt Despicable Me, by Pharrell. I had a tough time coming up with something that wasn't completely cracky for this song; I'm still not sure how well

Comments

[emmatheslayer]

That was fun I love Sam just going off. Nice job

[cleflink]

Sam has way too much self-restraint. Some days, you just wanna kill somebody.

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed

[emmatheslayer]

Loved it your welcome

[manzanita_crow]

I would have lost it somewhere in S1, so I much admire Sam's restraint, even here :D Cool story

[cleflink]

I suspect that the show would have been very different if Dean had been the one with crazy super powers. His methods of channeling anger are a little more... dramatic than Sam's.

I'm glad you enjoyed! Thank you!

[manzanita_crow]

I was rather puzzled when Sam was regarded as the one with anger issues in S5 :)

[liliaeth]

I wasn't. Dean tends to get angry and then gets over it. Sam is kinda like the Bruce Banner from the movies, who lets his rage simmer and simmer on and on, until it breaks free and destroy everything arounds him.

Delicious!

[cassiopeia7]

the Chronicles of Sam Winchester, Master of All Things Above and Below.

I love you, yes indeed. Never stop writing! ♥

Holy cow, woman, holy cow. This is amazing! Ominous, yet a thread of your winning humor snakes throughout. I can truly see this happening, Sam just snapping like that. Dean's reaction -- "Who the hell pissed in your cheerios?" -- was spot-on perfect, so wonderfully "Dean." And poor old Hawk, he had the misfortune of bringing a gun to a Winchester fight.

Fuck you and fuck the whole human race.

Oh, Sammy! ♥ (NGL, I've had days like that, more than a few. Fortunately for the planet, I have no Sam!powers.) ;)

Well-played, lady, well-played. Brava!! ♥

RE: Delicious!

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Man, you have no idea how close I was to writing crack about Sam, King of Hell's, Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day. Complete with torture of damned souls as stress relief. This song was a tricky one!

Dean probably will have a lot more to say once he's got over the shock of Sam losing his proverbial marbles because of a mugging, but he can take some comfort in the fact that he's always got some kind of witty one-liner for every situation.

Poor fed-up Sam. I think he's going to enjoy ruining all the best laid plans of angels, demons and humans. :)

Thank you, my dear! I'm glad you had fun with it!

[amberdreams]

So come on, who's going to fess up to pissing in Sam's cheerios? I love that you made this so deadly but so funny at the same time!

[cleflink]

I think at this point Sam's breakfast foods are largely metaphorical (although I don't know if I'd put it past Lucifer to manage it somehow, just to be irritating).

The song kept urging me towards crack, which I cannot write to save my life, so I'm glad that this combination of deadly and funny worked for you!

Thank you!

[madebyme_x]

What a wonderful fic! I loved how you managed to capture a perfect balance of light-hearted humour and dark-ominous power. And Dean's reaction to Sam's meltdown was spot on.

This challenge has been all kinds of fun, thank you for sharing this! :) (Do you mind if I friend you? I'd hate to miss any gems like this one!)

[cleflink]

I'm pretty sure that Dean's mouth was mostly on autopilot; he has yet to find a situation that isn't at least mildly improved by his rapier wit. *grins* I suspect that there shall be a great deal of yelling in the Winchester brothers' near future, though.

By all means, friend away! I like new friends. :)

Thank you for the lovely comment! I'm so glad you enjoyed!