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ext_3349961 August 5 2016, 04:14:58 UTC
<3 so much!

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cleflink August 5 2016, 05:35:45 UTC
Empath love for everyone! :)

I'm glad you enjoyed! Thank you!

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ayane42 August 5 2016, 04:28:51 UTC
wow!! awesome!! awesome! awesome!! i just loved this!! i loved the first part as well!!

sorry this is all the words i have for this, but yeah, i loved this!!

i hope there's more!!!!!

love!!!

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cleflink August 5 2016, 05:37:25 UTC
Jensen would tell you that emotions are much more articulate than words, anyway.

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!

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deceptivemirror August 5 2016, 06:03:32 UTC
I haven't commented on your stories before, and for that I feel bad, so I hope this one makes up for it. I LOVE empath!Jensen's story so much. It's amazing to see the nuances he has and perceive the world through his eyes! It's something I've wanted ever since I read the first of this series, and you haven't disappointed!

I admit that I had wondered just how much he felt for Jared as well, and you definitely answered that question. I'm really happy to have his side of things. I had hoped he'd be able to love as deeply as he deserved.

Jensen's parents can get smacked, though. They need to get over themselves. Parental love is well and good, but they never tried to get to know Jensen as a person, and that made me so mad.

Also, you are a TERRIBLE tease. I wanna know what happens when they confront Home! Meeting Jared's parents! AAAAHHHHH!

In short, this was wonderful, and thank you for continuing their story!

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cleflink August 6 2016, 04:48:56 UTC
Comments like this are what makes it really rewarding to be a writer, so thank you very much for taking the time to share your thoughts about my story. It's especially wonderful to know what parts were particularly memorable/effective for you as a reader. :)

Poor Jensen, he tries so hard to connect to people, but it's not as easy as everyone thinks it is. I can sympathize with why Jensen's parents have trouble interacting with him, but I agree that they are kind of terrible. Jared is probably going to work twice as hard now to show Jensen all the love he didn't get growing up.

*laughs* Me too! I guess it shall have to remain a mystery for now!

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

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mdlaw August 5 2016, 06:51:23 UTC
This was amazing. The interactions, the colors, everything. m :)

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cleflink August 6 2016, 05:02:01 UTC
Jensen could probably do with taking an art class or something to help him learn the names of more colours - it seems like being wired into Radio Jared 24/7 is going to stretch his current colour vocabulary just a bit. :)

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!

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spike247uk August 5 2016, 13:56:50 UTC
That was as awesome and amazing as I'd hoped it would be....!!!!! there's a downside to this though; I want MORE PLEASE!!!

Thank you for another verse, love these two sooo much!

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cleflink August 7 2016, 04:17:09 UTC
*laughs* If I knew what happened next, I'd definitely oblige, but your guess is as good as mine right now! Some more brainstorming will be required first, I think.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to comment! :)

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