[ Antidote ] NEED INPUT NOW!

[clearmind]

I'm going to put this on the back of my business card to give out as a flier. What are your thoughts:

UPDATED! 3-8-2005 5:51 EST

Version A:

Comments

[ladydolphina]

Well... since its not just a game flier i agree with the whole version b thing... not to mention you don't quite have enough space to include the photo... I like the partial shot of her though better then the full lenght when you do make just a flyer.... :)

[vixendarkfairy]

I like the top card, but without the photo. That is, I like "APRIL 2005" being at the bottom and large. It feels exciting -- sorta wets the appetite.

The photo is not working, though. Too busy, plus the dark colors and graininess don't match the text quality. If you do use a photo, she needs to look more corporate pro and less college. That means no ponytail, no tee-top. Put a real blouse on her, earrings that perfectly match her necklace, and much more styled hair.

[clearmind]

I went with version B, though made a few slight size changes. For example, put down "MAY 2005".

When we do the film shoot next week with Kate, I'm going to do some more action photos.

And now I sleep.