Fic: Margin of Error ~ (1/1)

Sep 27, 2008 17:20


Title: Margin of Error

Author: ClawofCat

Timing: AtS, Season 3

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Fred/Gunn

Warnings: Sexual situations

Summary: Fred discovers the perks of the job when Gunn comes home with a surprise for her after killing a demon.

A/N: For louise39, who gave me the prompts of “science” and “glass.” I’ve never written either Fred or Gunn before, so ( Read more... )

margin of error, other het, one shot, fic, prompts, fred/gunn

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owenthurman September 27 2008, 22:53:09 UTC
Well, I never really thought of those two as hot. Before now.

Not like I got myself a Ferrari or anything. I thought you’d like it, which…”

Or, you know, a pickup truck.

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clawofcat September 28 2008, 00:36:28 UTC
Well, I never really thought of those two as hot. Before now.
Me either, honestly. I was always more into the idea of Fred and Wes. I'm glad I could sell you on the pairing though. They were a joy to write.

More prompt fics to come soon!

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louise39 September 27 2008, 23:53:26 UTC
Oh! ::claps hands::

I hoped you'd pick Fred. And I am glad you gave her a bit of fun and happiness. She was full of life and seems to have encouraged Gunn in mutual satisfaction.
Fred, to me, was a scientist, a seeker of truths, an intellectual who allowed spots for love and gentleness.
Gunn fits well with her at this time.

“And it looks kinda like a really thick test tube.”
She would think of that! Love your use of the glass prompt.

Very entertaining.

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clawofcat September 28 2008, 00:31:17 UTC
I hoped you'd pick Fred. And I am glad you gave her a bit of fun and happiness.
Hee! Well, I'm glad I didn't disappoint. This story was so much fun to write. I was smiling the whole way through. Fred is such a sweet character and has such a tragic end that I had to give her a happy romp in the sack.

Gunn really matches her here because he loves her for her intellect and supports her in her pursuits. I thought it would be funny if she were the one on the other end of the miscroscope, so to speak. A kinky twist on her own nerdy interests.

Love your use of the glass prompt. Very entertaining.
Thanks for suggesting it! These prompts have been wonderful for kicking my muse into gear. It's feels really good to be writing, not to mention all sorts of characters. *big big hugs*

That's a beautiful icon of Fred, btw.

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snowpuppies September 28 2008, 04:05:41 UTC
Is it totally wrong of me to say this was adorable?

:P

Seriously, though. Your Fred was magnificent - cute and cute and a little kinky. ;)

You write this pair *very* well and should do so again.

*applauds*

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clawofcat September 28 2008, 17:01:47 UTC
Is it totally wrong of me to say this was adorable?
Not at all! Because it is. In the past I've gnashed my teeth over writing cute and fluffy stories because they were never on my own terms. The two that come to mind were bday stories for other people. But this was felt good because it fit my vision exactly.

And I'm thrilled you liked Fred. She was so sweet and likeable in canon, I wanted to capture that here. I am definately a Fred/Wes fan, but looking back the series she had a really good thing going with Gunn, too. I didn't want to him short shrift him for treating her right.

You write this pair *very* well and should do so again.
Thanks! Maybe I will. My only hesitation is I don't think many people would read it. =/

Lets see if I can't soldier on with the rest of these ficcies. It'll probably take me another two weeks at the rate I'm going. And i should really be working on my Bangel instead for IWRY. Guh.

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hello_spikey September 29 2008, 01:17:16 UTC
oh this is sooooooo cute and sweet and so THEM. Brava! Good characterizations!

And you know, the geekiness doesn't hurt. hee!

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clawofcat September 29 2008, 01:38:36 UTC
*snorfle* It is pretty cute. And I'm over the moon that I got their characterizations right. Fred and Gunn are the type of people who seem like they'd make really goods friends or would be a perfect couple to double date with.

I wanted this scene to feel very natural and light-hearted, the way I like my sex in RL to be (as opposed to angsty, miserableness, woo!). The geek references were fun, too. I've watched the Star Trek series and I actually looked up a famous physicist's name to use as the author of her book on string theory. Always a joy to work in little details like that!

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snogged September 29 2008, 02:07:40 UTC
Hot damn!

This was deliciously kinky and adorable.

YAY Star Trek references :)

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clawofcat September 29 2008, 03:02:00 UTC
Yay! Glad you enjoyed it. Cute kink just puts a huge, dopey smile on my face. I think BtVS fandom is well known for some of the outrageous kink we put our vampires through. But here I wanted it to seem very familiar and normal, something that we could relate to and tie to our own sex lives.

YAY Star Trek references :)
*grins* They just mysteriously worked their way in there. Dunno how it happened.

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